Kitkat103
Waiting for Daylight
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Okay so I started working on my first story. I am having a hard time categorizing it. I think it could fit in these categories:
Lesbian
Interracial
Self Help (Masturbation)
Okay here is a snipet of this story. I do not intend to make it very long because I get bored when I have to read long boring stories. If all goes well then I may make a continuation from someone elses point of view...
Okay I want all feedback (Good Bad Ugly or just a simple fuck you!) so that I can churn out a better story in the future.
The Benefits of Plasma Television
MaloMarz6969 – Lol what a freaking idiot. So what are you up to?
Sbarron85 – Just waiting for Matt at his place. He is supposed to be working late.
MaloMarz6969 – Aha. I did not know that office drones had to work so late, honey its 11pm!
Sbarron85 – I know that, what are you implying?
MaloMarz6969- Well I think he is out too late to just be desk jockeying.
Sbarron85 – Well I trust Matt so kaput 4 your theory. What are you up to aside from prying into my personal life?
MaloMarz6969 – I'm on this online forum and I'm just deliberately fucking with these people. There is one guy who is like bitching about these stories people submit. He keeps bitching and moaning about transsexuals so I am uploading these disturbing pictures of cross dressers and post op tranny women who look like men but have a vagina.
Sbarron85 – Wow that is incredibly sad. Weird because you are the biggest pussy I know
MaloMarz696 9– The power of the internet, chica
Sbarron85 – Okay I will leave you to it then
MaloMarz6969 – Sharon, Wait! B4 you go I want to show you something
Sbarron85 – Marla, Please no creepy tranny pics. I have to work in the morning and I need some sleep.
MaloMarz 6969 – Relax it’s not that, check this out, you can’t tell me this is not hot.
Sharon waited impatiently as Marla uploaded the photo to the chat window. She knew it would be an arousing picture but did not know how so. The thought of another post op tranny picture made Sharon recoil. She began to toss her red tresses with her hand as she watched the photo sharing applet load. Times like these she wished Matt would pay for broadband instead of having to siphon a wireless connection from the local pastry chain store.
Just then Marla’s file transfer was complete. Sharon opened the file using her local paint program. To her surprise she let out a moan. The image she saw in front of her was absolutely beautiful. The image depicted two Asian lesbians, naked and covered in body oil engaging in a sensual embrace. Although they were just embracing each other, the look on their faces were of pure ecstasy and bliss.
The image aroused Sharon in many ways. She had longed to have sex with another woman but she loved Matt dearly and did not want to end their relationship. But Sharon longed to engage in a lesbian tryst with her best friend Marla.
Marla was a voluptuous curvy Latina that Sharon had known since High School. Sharon found Marla to be so very sexy but she was always in her own world. Although she could be selfish at times, she was very endearing and reliable. Sharon once considered finding an NSA partner online, but who would be a better choice, some woman you found on a classified ad website or your busty best friend that you have known for years? Sharon was scared to ask Marla in fear that it would ruin their friendship. What if she does not feel the same way? It would be hard to associate with each other after such a proposition.
Sharon continued to admire the image. The oiled bosom of both women and the looks of pleasure on their faces made Sharon tingle. She was so entranced by their loveliness she had to push the computer chair away from the desk. She stood up and walked to Matt’s bedroom where she left her purse. She grabbed her mp3 player and quickly returned to the computer. She plugged it in and then synchronized the image to her mp3 player. With quickness Sharon practically leapt to the living room. There she plugged the mp3 player into the plasma television. Matt purchased the television for the Superbowl with intentions of returning it. One of his friends spilled a beer on the television so the return policy was null and void. He was now stuck with 56 inch plasma that he watched only twice a week.
After the light touching of the click wheel Sharon was greeted with the large image of the two women. She left the image on repeat as she made her way to the couch. The women were so gorgeous. It stirred up feelings of yearning that Sharon had hid inside of her. Aching to be touched by Marla, to feel her breasts pressed against her back. Her lips on her neck as she kissed her ever so gently. Her hands making their way down her sides, cupping her petite breasts, squeezing her nipples as Sharon moaned. As these thoughts raced through her head Sharon removed her clothes. She reclined back onto the couch……
Lesbian
Interracial
Self Help (Masturbation)
Okay here is a snipet of this story. I do not intend to make it very long because I get bored when I have to read long boring stories. If all goes well then I may make a continuation from someone elses point of view...
Okay I want all feedback (Good Bad Ugly or just a simple fuck you!) so that I can churn out a better story in the future.
The Benefits of Plasma Television
MaloMarz6969 – Lol what a freaking idiot. So what are you up to?
Sbarron85 – Just waiting for Matt at his place. He is supposed to be working late.
MaloMarz6969 – Aha. I did not know that office drones had to work so late, honey its 11pm!
Sbarron85 – I know that, what are you implying?
MaloMarz6969- Well I think he is out too late to just be desk jockeying.
Sbarron85 – Well I trust Matt so kaput 4 your theory. What are you up to aside from prying into my personal life?
MaloMarz6969 – I'm on this online forum and I'm just deliberately fucking with these people. There is one guy who is like bitching about these stories people submit. He keeps bitching and moaning about transsexuals so I am uploading these disturbing pictures of cross dressers and post op tranny women who look like men but have a vagina.
Sbarron85 – Wow that is incredibly sad. Weird because you are the biggest pussy I know
MaloMarz696 9– The power of the internet, chica
Sbarron85 – Okay I will leave you to it then
MaloMarz6969 – Sharon, Wait! B4 you go I want to show you something
Sbarron85 – Marla, Please no creepy tranny pics. I have to work in the morning and I need some sleep.
MaloMarz 6969 – Relax it’s not that, check this out, you can’t tell me this is not hot.
Sharon waited impatiently as Marla uploaded the photo to the chat window. She knew it would be an arousing picture but did not know how so. The thought of another post op tranny picture made Sharon recoil. She began to toss her red tresses with her hand as she watched the photo sharing applet load. Times like these she wished Matt would pay for broadband instead of having to siphon a wireless connection from the local pastry chain store.
Just then Marla’s file transfer was complete. Sharon opened the file using her local paint program. To her surprise she let out a moan. The image she saw in front of her was absolutely beautiful. The image depicted two Asian lesbians, naked and covered in body oil engaging in a sensual embrace. Although they were just embracing each other, the look on their faces were of pure ecstasy and bliss.
The image aroused Sharon in many ways. She had longed to have sex with another woman but she loved Matt dearly and did not want to end their relationship. But Sharon longed to engage in a lesbian tryst with her best friend Marla.
Marla was a voluptuous curvy Latina that Sharon had known since High School. Sharon found Marla to be so very sexy but she was always in her own world. Although she could be selfish at times, she was very endearing and reliable. Sharon once considered finding an NSA partner online, but who would be a better choice, some woman you found on a classified ad website or your busty best friend that you have known for years? Sharon was scared to ask Marla in fear that it would ruin their friendship. What if she does not feel the same way? It would be hard to associate with each other after such a proposition.
Sharon continued to admire the image. The oiled bosom of both women and the looks of pleasure on their faces made Sharon tingle. She was so entranced by their loveliness she had to push the computer chair away from the desk. She stood up and walked to Matt’s bedroom where she left her purse. She grabbed her mp3 player and quickly returned to the computer. She plugged it in and then synchronized the image to her mp3 player. With quickness Sharon practically leapt to the living room. There she plugged the mp3 player into the plasma television. Matt purchased the television for the Superbowl with intentions of returning it. One of his friends spilled a beer on the television so the return policy was null and void. He was now stuck with 56 inch plasma that he watched only twice a week.
After the light touching of the click wheel Sharon was greeted with the large image of the two women. She left the image on repeat as she made her way to the couch. The women were so gorgeous. It stirred up feelings of yearning that Sharon had hid inside of her. Aching to be touched by Marla, to feel her breasts pressed against her back. Her lips on her neck as she kissed her ever so gently. Her hands making their way down her sides, cupping her petite breasts, squeezing her nipples as Sharon moaned. As these thoughts raced through her head Sharon removed her clothes. She reclined back onto the couch……
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