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Talking with a fello Liter in PMs got me thinking of a past experience I have had sexually. I'm sure it would make a fun story to post. (Really a "one scene" short, short story though.)

I've never directly written a "play by play" of my sex life before. When I've tried, the story just sounds too dry to me. For those of you who have turned a specific sex act into a story, please tell me how you did it. Are there any secrets to make the writing process easier and less boring?
 
Well no not really. The only trick to writing a sex scene is adding enough detail that people 'enjoy' it and not so much they finish with the enjoying halfway through. ;)

I know not helping, but really I don't know myself, I more got lucky with my first time tale than anything on it being well received, and well on it being hot to. :cathappy:
 
Just remember the conversion process. All measurements are exagerated in porn was he 6 inches long? Now he's 8. Was he 8? Well, now he's a tripod. ;)

I'd say write it out as best as you can, then toss it to an editor or a friend to flesh it out. It'll have the skeleton of your true story, with some extra meat added for literary purposes.
 
Are you writing the sex scene to stand alone or are you trying to add it to a work of fiction?
 
I was considering, more or less, a "single scene" short story... As I've mentioned in past posts, I've never completed a "play by play" story of my real sex life.
 
Hallowed Eve said:
I was considering, more or less, a "single scene" short story... As I've mentioned in past posts, I've never completed a "play by play" story of my real sex life.

Try putting yourself outside of yourself and your partner when you're writing the scene and try to view yourself as a seperate character. This might help get a better picture of what you want to write about. Also, make sure you write the whole scene including what led up to the sex. If you're writing it from your perspective, tell what you were feeling and thinking. It's the details that make the story great.

And then get back to the Catholic school girl thread, damnit! You're supposed to be over that table!

*Cracks belt again*
 
Lee Chambers said:
Try putting yourself outside of yourself and your partner when you're writing the scene and try to view yourself as a seperate character. This might help get a better picture of what you want to write about. Also, make sure you write the whole scene including what led up to the sex. If you're writing it from your perspective, tell what you were feeling and thinking. It's the details that make the story great.

And then get back to the Catholic school girl thread, damnit! You're supposed to be over that table!

*Cracks belt again*

*smiles*

Thanks for the ideas.

I do try to keep the flirting to a minimum in the story threads though. :eek:
 
Hallowed Eve said:
*smiles*

Thanks for the ideas.

I do try to keep the flirting to a minimum in the story threads though. :eek:

Hmm...sounds like we need a new thread. :catroar:
 
Mr. Snooper, never once did I say "I did NOT flirt in the Story Ideas board". But I do limit myself. Thank you so much for caring. :rolleyes:
 
Hmmm you know, I gotta agree with snoopy. :confused:

I remember you flirting with just about everyone who said anything in any of your threads and replies to your posts. :catroar:


Not that I mind or think less of you of course, I'd be outflirting you if I didn't promise to keep my flirting to a minimum. :eek:

Well except capt, I just don't know why you like him so, he's an aussie, about only thing they are good for is beating each other up at rugby for our amusement. :nana:

Kidding capt, I swear. ;)
 
Let me say this, then, I feel bad when threads get hijacked.

Threads that Hung Son create are not "story ideas" though. He says "who do you want to fuck?", "what celeb milf do you want to fuck?", "who has incest?". He posts discussion threads that don't belong in this board anyway, so I don't care what happens in his.

Even in threads I start I'm working on stories.
 
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THAT SAID, I would love opinions from readers...

As a reader, does it turn you on more (or not at all) when someone puts a message in their story text that it is a real story? Does that distract you from enjoying the tale? Would you rather your own imagination run wild as you read?







I'm working on this tale right now.
 
Well I know I enjoy knowing it actually happened. Though to be honest I always picture it happening to me regardless. ;)
 
emap said:
Well I know I enjoy knowing it actually happened. Though to be honest I always picture it happening to me regardless. ;)

That's cool. :) I like placing myself in a tale, or at least visualizing it in my mind like I'm watching a movie. ;)

Heck, in the past all of my stories stem from life experiences and interests I have. Like, I'd never write about scat. Yuck. lol The total "play by play" has always seemed dry and boring to myself... And, when I've simply told someone of a past sexual encounter it's over after like three paragraphs. lol And then I wonder "how can I turn this into 750 words?" lol
 
I didn't have a problem doing it. Though I suppose when your first time turns into a gang bang it's hard to say it fast. ;)

To me seriously, the trick to doing a long telling of your first time is to place yourself there, remember each and every thing that you can, and tell about all of them.

If I didn't do that my first time tale would be really short, boyfriend took me out, we went up to makeout point drank some wine, I gave him a blowjob then 4 guys apeared pulled me out of the car put me on the roof and they all fucked me.

Seriously that in a nutshell was it. Told that way it's really boring, and sounds like something you would tell your mom, when your really really piss drunk and high on something else. ;)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Talking with a fello Liter in PMs got me thinking of a past experience I have had sexually. I'm sure it would make a fun story to post. (Really a "one scene" short, short story though.)

I've never directly written a "play by play" of my sex life before. When I've tried, the story just sounds too dry to me. For those of you who have turned a specific sex act into a story, please tell me how you did it. Are there any secrets to make the writing process easier and less boring?

Well, some sexual experiences will take much less space to write than others unless you include a bunch of story material before and/or after. The longer the experience took, the longer the story can be.

For instance, if you are riding the subway, and were hornier than usual, and your friend goosed you which triggered an orgasm... That would be hard to write an official length story about without going into agonizing amounts of detail. Although you could spend time explaining why you were so on edge, and describe the aftermath to fill up the space.

When I write the sex part of the story, I always try to concentrate on each feeling, and each sense. Are the hands doing anything? The mouth? What do you see, smell, taste.

Also, what I believe separates the good sex scenes from the mediocre ones is the quality of the descriptors. Alot of stories end up sounding like, "I licked her hard nipple as I thrust my cock into her." How about something a little more elaborate, "My tongue dragged across her nipple and I could feel the skin crinkling, drawing the nipple erect. I savored the salty and sweet flavor of her nipple, while readying to plunge into her. With a sudden thrust of my hips, my cock plunged deep inside of her. I could feel the drag of her sex, trying in vain to slow my progress. I only stopped when I felt our hips clash together." Anyway, two quotes that say the same thing, one is like 5 times as long as the other, and is more interesting to read (well, I think so).
 
Hallowed Eve said:
I was considering, more or less, a "single scene" short story... As I've mentioned in past posts, I've never completed a "play by play" story of my real sex life.

The trick is to avoid sounding like a sportscaster with the play by play. Whatever made the scene erotic for you when it happened has less to do with the actual chronological events but what was happening in your head and your partners. Who is this person, what led you there, why was your heart beating so fast, why were you so wet, why was he so hard, what made this more than just a tab A into slot B. If you can capture whatever the hunger was that drove you together, that's what will appeal to the reader.
 
Thanks to those of you who offered advice. :) The story is now finished. Look for Eat Your Fill soon. It's awaiting slicing and dicing from my editor and then I will submit it. ;)
 
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