Okay, I give up, I will now shamelessly pander for validation and feedback

[KillerMuffin]

KM has gone fishin for compliments...

On this poem thingy. I got a bunch of 5's (mercy votes from my friends?) and a nice email from a board regular that stroked my ego nicely. Okay. I really wanna know. Whattya think of my poem thing? It's my first actual real effort a poetry rather than a grudging teacher assigned does hard and tired rhyme? dojobber.

It's short.

http://216.169.118.69/stories/showstory.php?id=6436


I also invite real poets to shamelessly pander for validation and feedback. Just share, k?

 

[HSWriter]

A five from me KM.. well spoken and hot as is all that you write.. BRAVO.. BRAVO.. ENCORE.. ENCORE...

 

[*Eve*]

You have a lot of talent. I hope to see more of your work.

You have now officially been validated.

 

[*Jennifer-In-Flares*]

i dont know much about poetry killer muffin. i dont know if it's a good poem or not but it's very hot very erotic so that's another 5 babe. *jenny*

 

[KillerMuffin]

YAY!!! I've been validated!!!!

Thank you very much you thre!e. Hold still long enough and I may get maudlin with smooches.

 

[bulld]

Pander the Panda

I can't pander yet darlin(I just submitted "Interuptus" today. If the waiting time is anything like it was for my story we could be here a while. I liked your poem, different style from mine but hell, different strokes different folks. I believe I sent you a copy of "Interuptus" back when so you can see what my poetry writing skills are like. I guess I'm simple and slow and not very romantic but I get the point across.


And by the way: Roll me to your tie bar!!!

 

[bulld]

Re: Pander the Panda

I can't pander yet darlin(I just submitted "Interuptus" today). If the waiting time is anything like it was for my story we could be here a while. I liked your poem, different style from mine but hell, different strokes different folks. I believe I sent you a copy of "Interuptus" back when so you can see what my poetry writing skills are like. I guess I'm simple and slow and not very romantic but I get the point across.


And by the way: Roll me to your tie bar!!!

 

[Adoratrice]

5 from me ...........It has been a very long time since I have written ...I usually have to be depressed to write anything worth reading ...but in my humble opinion...anything that can make me feel as if I am there or cause visuals real enough to give me chills , which your poem did both ....is worthy of the highest praises.not that my opinion means squat but I think it was beautiful.


I can't wait to read it to my husband.

 

[teresafannin]

I think you are very talented & look forward to reading more of your work. You have a real gift with words, I enjoy your writing very much, posts, poetry & stories.

 

[HSWriter]

5 from me ...........It has been a very long time since I have written ...I usually have to be depressed to write anything worth reading ...but in my humble opinion...anything that can make me feel as if I am there or cause visuals real enough to give me chills , which your poem did both ....is worthy of the highest praises.not that my opinion means squat but I think it was beautiful.


I can't wait to read it to my husband.

Don't get down on yourself.. Your opinion is valued... Everyone here has an opinion about something, and every time those opinions are expressed, we are all made more aware of the feelings and emotions that go on in other peoples' heads.. It makes us more knowledgable to the ways of the world around us...

 

[Adoratrice]

Thank you ...your right.

 

[CW]

let's see,,, words, need some words that are apporiate for the poem in question,,,

Nice, very nice,,, delightful, super, grand, eloquent, full blown visuals resulted,,, read it twice,,, and may read it yet again,

In other words,,, ya done good young miss !!

 

[*Jennifer-In-Flares*]

Thank you very much you thre!e. Hold still long enough and I may get maudlin with smooches.

lol. promises promises! *jenny*

 

[KillerMuffin]

*jumps on jenny and starts smooching like crazy*

Um, did you know that you aren't wearing panties?

 

[*Jennifer-In-Flares*]

mmmmmm. its so hot in here they musta melted. did you know you're even better at smooches than you are at writing killermuffin? hows that for validation? lol *jenny*

 

[SeXy ReDHeD]

As it is with everything you write, KM

I like it... a lot. You've done another great job.

 

[Never]

It was okay, a bit clunky but it ended well.

 

[JadedHeart]

It was great, I loved it! Gave it a 5!

 

[Vlad]

Hell, just read it and thought it was great--a newly discovered talent...good work

Vlad

 

[Isabella Thorne]

Top of the Muffin to You!

<big hugs Muffin>

Bravo Buffy ... well done!

I noticed you posted your pic on the your profile, too ... beautiful ...

If i met you on the street, I would think you look like such a nice sweet innocent girl ...

but you are smoldering underneath, darling ...

 

[Guest]

I like it!

 

[bulld]

Pander the Panda 2

I ain't even believin this!! I submitted yesterday and it's posted today! I can now pander shamelessly. WOOOOHOOOO!!!!!

 

[angie girl]

The Muff rules!

an I know I could never write one because it has to be punctuated and everything...