ok, trying this again

[athena_by_night]

I may have a way with words, but I certainly don't with computers and technology. Any and all feedback anyone has on my stories would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

Athena

PS. Now maybe I will get something! LOL

 

[msboy8]

I may have a way with words, but I certainly don't with computers and technology. Any and all feedback anyone has on my stories would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

Athena

PS. Now maybe I will get something! LOL

Welcome to Lit. I'll read and comment on your stories soon.

 

[athena_by_night]

Thank you MSBoy... looking forward to it.

Athena

 

[msboy8]

Thank you MSBoy... looking forward to it.

Athena

Ok I read them, good stories. Just a few things:

"It's All Up in the Air" - One misspelling "out" instead of "our", should be our.

"Feast or Famine" - You used the word "stroke" for both what his hands and his cock were doing. Try not using the same word for both body parts, IMHO.

Both stories - You used an apostrophe (') instead of quotes (") for people speaking. Change those apostrophes to quotes.

Good job on those stories, I really liked them.

 

[athena_by_night]

Thank you MSBoy8~

Your feedback was duly noted and appreciated! And sheer laziness on my part with the apostrophes versus the quotations. I will change them in future stories.

IMHO?

Athena

 

[msboy8]

Thank you MSBoy8~

Your feedback was duly noted and appreciated! And sheer laziness on my part with the apostrophes versus the quotations. I will change them in future stories.

IMHO?

Athena

In My Humble Opinion

 

[athena_by_night]

Thank you once again. IMHO you gave excellent feedback. I am awaiting approval on several other stories with those bothersome apostrophes. It will be changed after that. Take care.

Athena

 

[msboy8]

Thank you once again. IMHO you gave excellent feedback. I am awaiting approval on several other stories with those bothersome apostrophes. It will be changed after that. Take care.

Athena

You too Naughty dreams

 

[athena_by_night]

The latest one getting approval. Several others queued. I sound British, lol... I am not. But someone else will enjoy it...