Ok ok so I'm a SAP but I have a lengthy story idea

MsJess0125

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I'm married, I miss dating so SUE me.

So I have a story idea, could get long..I dont know.

Woman is relocated because of Katrina, to Texas. She is a single mom (or not) and her male neighbor often helps her out, he's semi wealthy and they get together and play cards, etc. but he is loving his playboy bachelor lifestyle so they never hook up. They ALMOST do but since she is a mom she's not interested in the love 'em and leave 'em thing. Plus she is sort of enjoying her independence.
Wealthy neighbor has two bachelor buddies in town to hang out, they run into Katrina girl at the grocery store. She's kinda glum because its the first time her daughter is going out of town to visit distant relatives and she doesnt know what to do with herself alone for a month. Bachelor guys vow to come over and keep her company. Bachelor guy #2 who lives in LA is kind of attracted to her earthy "realness"
Bachelor guys come over. Wealthy bachelor, boisterous and fun, mans the grill. Bachelor number 3 makes drinks, he's kinda dull and dim. Bachelor 2 helps girl make sides in the kitchen. Internally he's freaking out because she is a good cook and he LOVES to cook they are clicking and ....stuff...

At some point, I want bachelor 2 to come spend the night because for SOME reason she does not like being alone...they almost hook up....but dont..

then at some point I want her to go to wild neighbors house for a party, she and bachelor 2 kiss...bachelor 2 eventually takes her on an actual date and they fuck like crazy and then.............. I dont know.....

I want some light bondage in there somewhere eventually, prolly not their first time. She has gotten so used to running her life, she is ultra organized, super independent. She secretly wants someone to come into her life and take control. He can do that.

please help eloquent lit writers...we are not all born with this skill...


I can make some badass cheesecake tho
 
How about the mom and guy two are at the party, and get in the hot tub...lot's of great thing can happen then..
 
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