Ok, I give in. Please read me.

[English Lady]

Right i'm going to submit this thread quickly before the need for ego stroking disipates and the fear of critiscism rears it's ugly head again *L*


My latest story -Gaze


This has taken ages to write, it was inspired by one of the guess the voice challenges we did, it's an exhibitionist and Voyeur story, just over one lit page long.


All comments and feedback accepted.

Ego stroking prefered

*deep breath*

Ok i'm pushing the submit thread button....

Now!

 

[Recidiva]

You got my vote, honey!

Thank you!

 

[English Lady]

recidiva Bless your kind soul!

 

[Recidiva]

recidiva Bless your kind soul!

I am not kind. Ask anybody.

I just love your story

 

[English Lady]

Aww shucks *blushes*Thank you. I am glad you did, I'm pretty fond of it myself

 

[Recidiva]

Aww shucks *blushes*Thank you. I am glad you did, I'm pretty fond of it myself

Yes, if I were just nice I would have backed out quietly.

Didn't want to. That's what makes it good.

I write too, it's always fun to have that first 5 from a friend before everyone runs in and you realize you're not everyone's cup of tea

 

[English Lady]

I repeat the mantra

"votes aren't that important."

the feedback is what counts, but hell, it's nice to get good votes too *L*

 

[Recidiva]

I repeat the mantra

"votes aren't that important."

the feedback is what counts, but hell, it's nice to get good votes too *L*

No, they're not THAT important, but it's fun. I think of it as a little game of "The Sims" It's nice to see reactions from people, even if it's just little numbers moving.

Nice to know you caused an effect, that's the whole point of the thing.

 

[English Lady]

No, they're not THAT important, but it's fun. I think of it as a little game of "The Sims" It's nice to see reactions from people, even if it's just little numbers moving.

Nice to know you caused an effect, that's the whole point of the thing.

Now theres a good way to look at it

 

[Recidiva]

Now theres a good way to look at it

And then someone reads my stuff and tells me nice things and I can go use that to write ANOTHER story!

 

[HollyHawkk]

Nice Story~ I love your discription of the characters! What woman has not experience the "you will get over him" Girls night out.

 

[eric shawn listo]

Oooooh, El. Very hot story. Sesuous amd moving. Loved it.

 

[English Lady]

recidiva -exactly

Holly - Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.


EL -feeling a bit calmer now *grins*

 

[English Lady]

Oooooh, El. Very hot story. Sesuous amd moving. Loved it.

Aww shucks *blush* what exactly did it move?*grins* thanks gorgeous

 

[hugo_sam]

Nice Story~ I love your discription of the characters! What woman has not experience the "you will get over him" Girls night out.

I enoyed the story very very much EL. It was very fast paced but discriptive.
Was definitely up there on the 'heat' scale. Thank you.



Hugo

 

[English Lady]

Thanks Hugo, it's good of you to mention pace, because i did at points wonder if I was going too slow but i do like the slow simmering build up myself *grins*

 

[hugo_sam]

Thanks Hugo, it's good of you to mention pace, because i did at points wonder if I was going too slow but i do like the slow simmering build up myself *grins*

I can certainly understand that, the story definitely leads to that, But...Isn't that a different thread?

Hugo

 

[English Lady]

I can certainly understand that, the story definitely leads to that, But...Isn't that a different thread?

Hugo

You're being rude! I'd spank you, but you'd like it

 

[cantdog]

Your tone in this one isn't the same as your others I've read, EL. It's much more anxious and serious. I've been used to easygoing joyful romps from you.

 

[Stella_Omega]

goddammit, I left feedback twice. EL, would you delete one of them, so I don't feel like a dummy? Not that you don't deserve a double helping of terrific...

I have an old story with a similar scenario. I was thinking I should re-edit it and put it up- now I think I will!
We could start a story chain, about sweet-talkers. It could be called "elocution lessons"

 

[English Lady]

Your tone in this one isn't the same as your others I've read, EL. It's much more anxious and serious. I've been used to easygoing joyful romps from you.

Well i think my girly character in this one was anxious and serious. I hope it wasn't a bad thing...

 

[English Lady]

goddammit, I left feedback twice. EL, would you delete one of them, so I don't feel like a dummy? Not that you don't deserve a double helping of terrific...

I have an old story with a similar scenario. I was thinking I should re-edit it and put it up- now I think I will!
We could start a story chain, about sweet-talkers. It could be called "elocution lessons"

your wish is my command love, though i'm glad you got that excited you left comment twice *grins*

I adore a man who can sweet talk/type. What a cool idea actually I think that story chain could be fun. *grins*

My husband is sooooooo good at sweet talk. I think alot of my Gaze guy was based upon him and the way he talks to me

 

[Stella_Omega]

Well i think my girly character in this one was anxious and serious. I hope it wasn't a bad thing...

Not at all! It's a sign of artistic growth, learning to control other emotions besides the ones you are comfortable with. At least, it feels that way for me.
I still have a hard time with tragic endings, though.

 

[English Lady]

Not at all! It's a sign of artistic growth, learning to control other emotions besides the ones you are comfortable with. At least, it feels that way for me.
I still have a hard time with tragic endings, though.

Thanks I do like to try things a bit different now, i need to keep challenging myself. I've done two tragic endings (A fruitful life and till the end) and they both ripped me apart. I didn't plan them, they just happened.

 

[Recidiva]

goddammit, I left feedback twice. EL, would you delete one of them, so I don't feel like a dummy? Not that you don't deserve a double helping of terrific...

I have an old story with a similar scenario. I was thinking I should re-edit it and put it up- now I think I will!
We could start a story chain, about sweet-talkers. It could be called "elocution lessons"

Everyone I'm attracted to is a sweet talker. Carefully sandwiched between "Make me laugh" "take my breath away" and "Mind Fuck"