Ode to Tentacles (Short and Sweet)

[Violet_Vixen]

I wrote this as a Valentine's thing, but posted it to Lit recently. I'm more of a prose person usually, and this was my first attempt at erotic poetry. It's not meant to be serious, but I do like tentacles. Feedback/commentary is welcome.
Ode to Tentacles

 

[Violet_Vixen]

The prose is great, although I don't find the fetish appealing, you paint a vivid picture.

Thanks so much for your feedback. I guess you could say a lot of fetish stuff finds a way into my writing lol.

 

[AlinaX]

Well, that's fun.

It starts off very much as a sea monster with great, suckered squid arms, but towards the end you reference space and Alien's famous tagline, and that did provoke an interesting image in my mind juxtaposing the popular trope of alien tentacles aboard a space ship with the silent image of a spaceship adrift, no outward sign of the violent ravishment within...

 

[Violet_Vixen]

Well, that's fun.

It starts off very much as a sea monster with great, suckered squid arms, but towards the end you reference space and Alien's famous tagline, and that did provoke an interesting image in my mind juxtaposing the popular trope of alien tentacles aboard a space ship with the silent image of a spaceship adrift, no outward sign of the violent ravishment within...

I love fun. Maybe I should try to write some for other fetishes and kinks. Would be a good exercise at the very least. And I couldn't not have an Alien reference in there lol. Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and the feedback.