Maid of Marvels
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OBSESSION
"Where's daddy's little girl?"
"Come sit with daddy, Janie."
It had always been that way, and of course she would go -- even when she thought she was too big to be sitting on her father's lap or cuddling up with him. Her dad would glare defiantly at her mother when Janie obeyed until eventually Edith would snatch her away or send her to her room.
Fighting and raised voices followed by her mother's cries and screams ensued these rare times when Ted Manning paid overt attention to his daughter. She never understood it, feeling that her mother was somehow resentful of her father's affection toward her. At other times, aside from disciplining her for some imagined infraction or assigning chores, no one even noticed she was alive.
Jane was thirteen when her parents sent her away to boarding school, visiting her there on holiday rather than having her come home. She hated the solitude and isolation from her family, but at the same time she felt a sense of relief. At St. Xavier's, Janie didn't have to listen to what had become almost constant arguing and fighting, most times over her. She made friends, participated in sports, excelled in her subjects. Jane Manning was almost happy.
Finally, five years later, Jane Manning had graduated and she was going home. At last.
This is a closed thread. Comments and critiques are welcome by PM as always. We hope you enjoy it.
Maid & Tib
"Where's daddy's little girl?"
"Come sit with daddy, Janie."
It had always been that way, and of course she would go -- even when she thought she was too big to be sitting on her father's lap or cuddling up with him. Her dad would glare defiantly at her mother when Janie obeyed until eventually Edith would snatch her away or send her to her room.
Fighting and raised voices followed by her mother's cries and screams ensued these rare times when Ted Manning paid overt attention to his daughter. She never understood it, feeling that her mother was somehow resentful of her father's affection toward her. At other times, aside from disciplining her for some imagined infraction or assigning chores, no one even noticed she was alive.
Jane was thirteen when her parents sent her away to boarding school, visiting her there on holiday rather than having her come home. She hated the solitude and isolation from her family, but at the same time she felt a sense of relief. At St. Xavier's, Janie didn't have to listen to what had become almost constant arguing and fighting, most times over her. She made friends, participated in sports, excelled in her subjects. Jane Manning was almost happy.
Finally, five years later, Jane Manning had graduated and she was going home. At last.
This is a closed thread. Comments and critiques are welcome by PM as always. We hope you enjoy it.
Maid & Tib
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