Novice seeking Experienced Editor/Mentor

[1RubyPearl]

I’ve posted my first submission for the V-Day contest (without an editor’s help-my bad) and would like to write more, but want, and NEED, an editor to help me with story structure, dialogue, and flow. My grammar and punctuation are rusty; proofing for these things would also be appreciated.

I’m not an experienced fiction writer, but have faired pretty well with my first entry. Even though my submission is posted, I’d still like an editor help me make it a more polished piece of writing, for my own satisfaction.

I see myself writing primarily in the Erotic Couplings, Non-Human, Loving Wives, Romance, and First Time categories.

If you think you might be interested in working with me, but would like to see a bit more than my first submission, I’ve also started a story (@ 600 words so far) for the Earth Day contest (non-human category) that I can send along.

My V-Day story is titled, “Mine.”

Here’s the link to my author page:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1057644&page=bio

~Thanks

 

[faq52]

IK started reading your story.
but I found it rather bland and stopped.
apart from one or two odd sentence structures it wasnt that bad to read but some how it felt a bit like reading a shopping list. sorry!