dawei
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I can't deny that I’m a little disappointed because my first vote on my new chapter 12 story was a “one”. That sucks even if its not a real indicator since I am trying my best to say something unique and interesting. Anyways, that is just me ranting... 
So, I just released my latest addition, Chapter 12 of my first story (out of about 16 total chapters, I think.) I’ve tried to make the chapters mostly independent so that they might be read separately. But, I’m curious to hear if you can jump right into the middle of the story without necessarily reading the whole thing.
I haven’t gotten much in the way of feedback on any of the later chapters either, so that is also why I’m posting here. I guess its understandable as a story progresses longer, readers don’t want to start something in the middle. Plus, I know the character development in this is limited and I use a lot of introspection. Yet still, even if the other chapters aren’t very popular, at least they seem to be rated well enough so that I do feel good about that.
In any case, I’d like to know if you can jump into the middle of this well enough, and if something isn’t said right in the chapter or if there are things that aren’t understood. Are there any flaws that need addressing? Is it erotic? Is it interesting? Did the ending work okay?
Thanks for your comments.
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-flame-in-the-night-ch-12
So, I just released my latest addition, Chapter 12 of my first story (out of about 16 total chapters, I think.) I’ve tried to make the chapters mostly independent so that they might be read separately. But, I’m curious to hear if you can jump right into the middle of the story without necessarily reading the whole thing.
I haven’t gotten much in the way of feedback on any of the later chapters either, so that is also why I’m posting here. I guess its understandable as a story progresses longer, readers don’t want to start something in the middle. Plus, I know the character development in this is limited and I use a lot of introspection. Yet still, even if the other chapters aren’t very popular, at least they seem to be rated well enough so that I do feel good about that.
In any case, I’d like to know if you can jump into the middle of this well enough, and if something isn’t said right in the chapter or if there are things that aren’t understood. Are there any flaws that need addressing? Is it erotic? Is it interesting? Did the ending work okay?
Thanks for your comments.
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-flame-in-the-night-ch-12
