Not for everyone but some may like

[Scandilove]

I actually wrote this as the prologue for a non-erotic thriller I'm working on but it occurred to me that some here may appreciate some of the themes. Feel free to read and feedback if it's your type of thing. It probably works better in its originally intended form but happy to hear any thoughts.

https://www.literotica.com/s/flowers-are-always-a-good-idea

 

[FelHarper]

Nice twist at the midpoint. I could feel the creeping menace as you made it all too clear what was really going on. That was a little uncomfortable to read. Mission accomplished, I think.

 

[Scandilove]

Nice twist at the midpoint. I could feel the creeping menace as you made it all too clear what was really going on. That was a little uncomfortable to read. Mission accomplished, I think.

Thanks for taking the time to read. I'm glad, in a good way, that it was an uncomfortable read.

 

[firmbutgentle]

Oh that is very creepy and beautifully written. Nice.