NonHuman, Gay Male, and Group Sex Advocates...Come talk to me!

Thank you to everyone...

I really love to read, so when I find the time all of these suggestions sound very good to me. I have already read some of them. They have all been great so far!

J.K.
 
bluebell7 said:
:rose: :heart:
There is no spoon.
There is no verbosity.

Are you back and better? With all of your factory original parts?

Ooops, sorry. Just realized that this was here and I missed it. I hate to miss bluebellosity. :)

I'm doing well, you're either wonderfully kind or an awful judge of verbosity, and they did keep a little bit of me, actually. The goal of the operation was to kick out a factory reject part that was causing problems. That happy goal has been accomplished and I'm a happier horse for it.

And you're a kind and lovely Bluebell. :kiss:
 
NymzanSusauren said:
I enjoyed 'Will'. Your namesake is quite the read.

Thank you very much. It was a long struggle, but I'm happy with the results - although still faintly surprised that anyone else finds it readable. *laugh* Bit of an odd topic, I know. I'll try to return the favor soon. :)
 
I have a bit of science-fiction PWP in my mind-- and I see the woman as being simian-humanoid. I like the idea, but those dang furries have taken the joy out of animal people for me :(

I'm really not sure I can write it unless I take it into the realm of actual plot.

Fuck. So to speak.
 
I enjoy reading. No favor was involved, dear Black. It was a wonderful story.
I used to be facinated by "Piper, at the Gate" and yours reminded me of that same facination with my favorite species.

I have several stories where my shape-shifters can turn into stallions, but none of them are typed up for posting.

I hope everyone enjoys my stories if they can get around to reading them.

I really like my newest one (Ben'hamin_NonHuman Category), but the Gods Of Literature are slow about deeming my posts fit for approval. One through four are posted for those wishing to read it.

My first story on here is split between Gay Male and Group Sex. It starts in Gay Male under 'A Simple Shadow'. Be forewarned: it is mostly story. If you are reading it just for the sex, you will be disappointed. That comes much later on.

Since every one did not leave comments after reading...I haven't typed up those sections yet to post them. The whole purpose of posting here was to get people's oppinions of the writing. Obviously I have plenty of readers, but not many willing to tell me what they think of the work, section by section.

J.K.
 
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NymzanSusauren said:
I enjoy reading. No favor involved. It was a wonderful story. I used to be facinated by "Piper, at the Gate" and yours reminded me of that same facination with my favorite species.

I have several stories where my shape-shifters can turn into stallions, but none of them typed up for posting.

I hope you enjoy my stories if you get around to it.

I really like my newest one, but the Gods Of Literature haven't deemed fit to approve it yet.

J.K.
Put a link to your stories page into your signature!

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Because it's obvious that you'll be staying around here for a bit :)

I just read "Ben'hamin Ch. 01" and I like the premise. My editor's brain recommends that you get rid of absolutely every exclamation point that isn't dialogue. Your story would be far stronger for it. :rose:
 
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Ah, I like this...Someone telling me things I need to know!

Stella_Omega said:
Put a link to your stories page into your signature!

I haven't the slightest idea how to do that. If someone wants to give me very clear details, I would be happy to try, though.

Stella_Omega said:
Because it's obvious that you'll be staying around here for a bit :)

*Blush* Why, ah...thank you, dear.

Stella_Omega said:
I just read "Ben'hamin Ch. 01" and I like the premise. My editor's brain recommends that you get rid of absolutely every exclamation point that isn't dialogue. Your story would be far stronger for it. :rose:

I also haven't figured out how to get back into a story I have posted to add edits. *sigh* I know: 'computer illiterate' right?

J.K.
 
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no reply?

I left it all day while I slept and no one said anything to me...

I really wish the Literotica people would approve Ben'hamin 5, I can't remember where I ended it and I need to know to post more of it before I turn up missing for several months having to leave all of you hanging on the damn story.

J.K.
 
O-o-okay...


For your signature, go here;
http://forum.literotica.com/usercp.php?

and you will see links along the left side for an assortment of options, including your siggy. It has all the same extra text stuff- colors etc-- as these posting pages have :)
Here's the direct link;
http://forum.literotica.com/profile.php?do=editsignature

To edit a story that has been published, you'll have to resubmit the edited version. Post it with the same name, plus :EDIT: or some such in the title. Then wait another hundred years for the changes to show up... Sorry about that part.... ;)
 
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