Non-erotica

[thenry]

Flesh

I'm considering writing something much longer in this tone or style to a story I'd written a few years ago. It doesn't have explicit sexual content, so the story was submitted as non-erotic. I'm interested in all feedback, as I just reread the story and found it interesting, but especially feedback on the style.

THenry

 

[cookiejar]

Flesh

I'm considering writing something much longer in this tone or style to a story I'd written a few years ago. It doesn't have explicit sexual content, so the story was submitted as non-erotic. I'm interested in all feedback, as I just reread the story and found it interesting, but especially feedback on the style.

THenry

I read your story and sent you feedback...