The Jeffinator
Captain Manbeard
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I am in the process of writing a story that will end up being a series of novels. It is not erotic, however, it is a magical fantasy adventure. Before I get it published, do you think I should submit it to the non-erotic section of the site and see how people like it? I'm just curious what everyone's opinion is.
The story takes place in the magical kingdom of Zangaard, which has been hidden from the outside world for nearly a century. Upon his deathbed, King Aldon gives the crown to Korda, the son of his daughter. However, a man named Jironus, who is the son of Aldon's firstborn, is supposed to be crowned king -- it's his birthright. However, as Aldon falls farther and farther into death's waiting arms, he is able to see a dark aura around Jironus, and thus gives power to Korda.
Well, Jironus is not happy and eventually he tries to sabotage Korda's kinghood ceremony, and for that is arrested. After a few violent encounters occur, Korda finally sentences Jironus to death, but he manages to escape, and what does he take with him? The Golden Orb, which is the kingdom's most sacred object.
With the power of the Orb, Jironus is able to hide himself from them, and they are forced to give up the hunt. But that is the least of their worries now, for it is revealed that if the Orb is not returned to it's altar, the kingdom will slowly begin to lose it's power.
They discover that the Orb was created by the Ancients, using Stardust.
The story basically chronicles their search for the hidden temple of the Ancients, where legend says they left a supply of stardust.
So, what are you views? Should I submit it to the non-erotic section?
The story takes place in the magical kingdom of Zangaard, which has been hidden from the outside world for nearly a century. Upon his deathbed, King Aldon gives the crown to Korda, the son of his daughter. However, a man named Jironus, who is the son of Aldon's firstborn, is supposed to be crowned king -- it's his birthright. However, as Aldon falls farther and farther into death's waiting arms, he is able to see a dark aura around Jironus, and thus gives power to Korda.
Well, Jironus is not happy and eventually he tries to sabotage Korda's kinghood ceremony, and for that is arrested. After a few violent encounters occur, Korda finally sentences Jironus to death, but he manages to escape, and what does he take with him? The Golden Orb, which is the kingdom's most sacred object.
With the power of the Orb, Jironus is able to hide himself from them, and they are forced to give up the hunt. But that is the least of their worries now, for it is revealed that if the Orb is not returned to it's altar, the kingdom will slowly begin to lose it's power.
They discover that the Orb was created by the Ancients, using Stardust.
The story basically chronicles their search for the hidden temple of the Ancients, where legend says they left a supply of stardust.
So, what are you views? Should I submit it to the non-erotic section?
