Non consent story idea... what are your thoughts?

[LaRascasse]

It goes something like this...

There is an eighteen year old boy who is at the top of his class, has a steady sweetheart and is very good at programming. He coaxes his Dad to get him a summer internship at the software company he works for.

On the first day, he makes a few friends and ends up making a change to a piece of code written by his Dad's boss. The boss (who is a woman in her 40's/50's) calls him into her office and actually surprises him by saying he did a good job. She then asks him who he is and what he wants to do in the future. They talk some more and eventually she seduces him after hours in the office when they're alone. For him it's a rush of adrenaline/mature woman fantasy come true.

The next day, she starts making some overly ostentatious moves on him before he politely rebuffs her, saying he has a girlfriend and it was a mistake. She quietly calls him into her office and very nicely tells him that his father's head is on the chopping block and it is in her hands whether he will have a job at the end of the summer or not. She adds that he had better reconsider his decision, otherwise she will make sure his Dad ends up with no job, severance and is unable to find work again. She gives the stunned guy some time to think it through.

Very reluctantly, he accepts and she coaxes more sex out of him.

The story is basically how this guy struggles with having his home and internship lives. He can't face his family any more, he can't look his girlfriend in the eye and he hates himself. Possible avenues include him resorting to drugs and the boss-lady telling him he has to service executives/directors/senior management of the company (not all female) at her behest. His life completely unravels.

 

[HeyAll]

The fact that the 'victim' is male makes it a little different.

Perhaps a hot scene could be the guy on his knees giving oral sex to the boss, while the boss is on the phone with his dad.

The ending could be that he has to have sex with the female CEO who's too busy to date because she's a career woman.

 

[Tmmldr]

It goes something like this.......she coaxes more sex out of him.

The story is basically how this guy struggles with having his home and internship lives. He can't face his family any more, he can't look his girlfriend in the eye and he hates himself. Possible avenues include him resorting to drugs and the boss-lady telling him he has to service executives/directors/senior management of the company (not all female)....

Maybe his dad isn't such an angel either. Maybe one day while he's under her desk, naked and servicing her orally, he hears her talking on the phone to one or two male executives who like gay sex about her boytoy.

One of them is his dad...

 

[PerilEyes]

It's got...potential! This coercive storylines always need a suspension of disbelief, but I think it can work and be really hot here! And I do like that you added the human element to it...it's going to take its toll on the kid so why not add some darker elements?

 

[lovecraft68]

My interest is peaked simply because you're being daring enough to have it be a man in the blackmail situation rather than the redundant woman cliche.

I think you can make it darker by the office woman becoming a Glenn Close Fatal Attraction type character.

he does it with her then tries to slip away for a weekend with his girlfriend and the boss starts stalking him, watching them, maybe she is really twisted and demands he talks the girlfriend into a threeway

Anyway it has potential.

Considering your prior works why do I smell a guilt driven suicide coming up?

 

[Sean Renaud]

The reason this happens to women not men is because women can simply make themselves available and get laid, the worst that ever happened to a not ugly woman is she couldn't be as picky as she wanted but that's it.

Moving along I like the idea quite a lot. I'm not sure I like the profession choice, I like the idea of a lawyer of some sort, the kind of person who has the kind of power that when if our hero tries to go and tell someone of authority that it's the 50 year old Assistant DA vs 18 year old punk kid and half the people won't believe it because of who she is and the other half are under her thumb in one way or another and aren't going to rock the boat. Though I guess it could still work as written. I like it. Might even start work on it once the new year starts. I've got one final thing to finish this year and then I'm taking the rest of 2013 off.

 

[lovecraft68]

The reason this happens to women not men is because women can simply make themselves available and get laid, the worst that ever happened to a not ugly woman is she couldn't be as picky as she wanted but that's it.

Moving along I like the idea quite a lot. I'm not sure I like the profession choice, I like the idea of a lawyer of some sort, the kind of person who has the kind of power that when if our hero tries to go and tell someone of authority that it's the 50 year old Assistant DA vs 18 year old punk kid and half the people won't believe it because of who she is and the other half are under her thumb in one way or another and aren't going to rock the boat. Though I guess it could still work as written. I like it. Might even start work on it once the new year starts. I've got one final thing to finish this year and then I'm taking the rest of 2013 off.

The lawyer idea makes me think of The Good Wife.

As for your point. Yes its harder to believe that an attractive woman can be hard up for sex, but only until you think it through a bit.

there is a huge double standard between older professional men and women. A guy with a sugar baby is "good for him" the cougar with the cub still has that snickering "what a slut" thing going

So a professional woman has to be choosy with their dalliances whereas men can stick it in anything because, that's what they do and they never care about how they are perceived.

From a straight up reader POV I always will stick to my theory that there is a lot of male readership that is uncomfortable with a woman controlling anything let alone sex.

Men with zero confidence want the man to always be on top, because they feel they cannot be.

Real men don't care

Going by stories, comments, thread ideas and scores on various works I have come to the conclusion there is a lot of low self esteem men around here.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I hear what you're saying about perceptions, though I still have a hard time buying that women on that level have THAT hard a time keeping anything on the DL, we aren't talking celebs who can't drive 45 minutes in any direction and go to a club where nobody will recognize them.

I'll up your guys don't care how their perceived to 'a guy getting all that is king of the office and to be emulated'

I'm not sold however on your perception of men vs women. When it comes to the non-con it's ALWAYS women who send me messages and comments about how hot the stories made them. Confuses the hell out of me and when I kept asking and none could explain it I simply decided that I don't need to understand it anymore than I really understand how I push buttons in my house and you read them in yours. It works and that's good enough.

Which isn't to say there aren't a lot of angry little men floating around but I also think unless we're going to complain about the entire world and how hard it is to sell the brave Maiden rescuing the Prince to ANY audiance (outside a hilarious joke about role reversal) that some acceptance of the world as it functions is necessary.

I also haven't seen the Good Wife, I'll see if it's on Netflix or something I can watch real quick. I jsut feel like the current power isn't really sufficient but it is fiction and people have been overpowered by less in real life.

 

[lovecraft68]

I hear what you're saying about perceptions, though I still have a hard time buying that women on that level have THAT hard a time keeping anything on the DL, we aren't talking celebs who can't drive 45 minutes in any direction and go to a club where nobody will recognize them.

I'll up your guys don't care how their perceived to 'a guy getting all that is king of the office and to be emulated'

I'm not sold however on your perception of men vs women. When it comes to the non-con it's ALWAYS women who send me messages and comments about how hot the stories made them. Confuses the hell out of me and when I kept asking and none could explain it I simply decided that I don't need to understand it anymore than I really understand how I push buttons in my house and you read them in yours. It works and that's good enough.

Which isn't to say there aren't a lot of angry little men floating around but I also think unless we're going to complain about the entire world and how hard it is to sell the brave Maiden rescuing the Prince to ANY audiance (outside a hilarious joke about role reversal) that some acceptance of the world as it functions is necessary.

I also haven't seen the Good Wife, I'll see if it's on Netflix or something I can watch real quick. I jsut feel like the current power isn't really sufficient but it is fiction and people have been overpowered by less in real life.

What I will say here is you think those are all women sending those messages You really never know around here.

Yes women have rape fantasies, but those women will tell you its not about the sex, but the powerlessness. Of just being taken with no say, the sex almost means nothing.

What men derive from rape fantasies (and all the assorted LW nastiness) is pretty much "yeah take that you bitch! You like that you bitch? I think more guys should have raped her ass!"

That's a big difference.

Its like in D/S the dom can do some pretty harsh things to the sub, but despite common perception the Sub has more than their share of control because in true D/S there are boundaries set and the sub decides them so the sub is getting no more than what she(or he) will allow which is why so many women are into submissive fantasies.

rape removes all consent and the guys fantasizing about are getting off on the act and the pain, there is no mental aspect. Because mental capacity and sex drive do not mix in men.

So women may enjoy your work for the sheer fantasy that leads up to and revolves around the action, but the men are stroking to nothing short of the brutal sexual act.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Guys getting off on making someone powerless and woman getting off on being powerless. Somewhere there is an analogy about plugs and sockets here and how odd you'd almost have to think the universe was designed with some kind of order in place.

True, you never know when it's a guy or a girl for sure. You kinda have to trust them and on occasion learn to read em, when yo've been on the net for a while it's usually not impossible to tell guys from girls at a glance. We don't actually talk the same ways. Again that usually requires a while and your point still stnds regardless.

 

[LaRascasse]

I see some interesting takes for my idea here...

My vision of it is not so much power exchange as much as a total feeling of helplessness where all you can do is pray for it to end.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Sorry bout that, I kinda highjack threads entirely by accident when it comes to NonCon.

Back on subject was there anything else that caught your eye. I have to admit your gave a pretty outstanding opening post, most of the time we'd have to sit and tease this kind of detail out of a new poster so part of the reason you faded into the background was you did your job and did it fucking well. I don't even know what o ask that you didn't cover rather well. Keep this thread alive since I can't promise me and LC will keep bantering back and forth and I want to at least take a shot at this but after the New Year. Until then I'm taking a bit of time to chill but if I end up forgetting about this by then it'll end up put on the list of shit I don't even remember.

I'm not as good as LC but hey shit happens.