non-consent sex as punishment ?

[NASCARaddicted]

maybe this is too extrem or to perverted, but I want to hear your thoughts:

There is this family in the puritan age. The parents raise their daughter very strict and very puritanically. She is not allowed to talk to males. Even looking at them is forbidden, because it would mean "lust" which is forbidden.

Of course, they also don't tell her anything about sex or stuff like that, so this girl is totally innocent. She still believes that babys are delivered by a stork, even though she is already 18.

It is naturally that the girl sometimes asks questions like: "Why is blood coming out between my legs once in a month ?" - "It's a torture from God, because you have been a bad girl" explains her father.

From time to time, he punishes her. For example, once she accidently dropped an egg. Her father beated her with a stick. Another time, she hearded goats and one of the goats fell down a rock and died ... this time he used a bull whip to beat her up.

The girl didn't protested, because she was used to be punished. Once she coughed during lunch, so her father gave her a slaped her in the face with the open hand.

Now, on this one day, the father noticed that his daughter looked at a boy. He told her to look down to the ground, when a male person out of her family was near, but this time she didn't.

Later, at home, he told her that she would deserve a special punishment, because she looked at the boy. Even the bull whip wasn't enough this time. No, this time, it had to be the "meat stick". He told her to get naked and lie down. As I said, she is innocent, so she has no idea what a "meat stick" could be. And of course, she has no idea about what comes next.

He fucks her pretty hard. The father really enjoys it, but the daughter doesn't.

So, do you think this could become a story ? non-consent sex as a punishment ? Or do you think this is just to perverted/unrealistic ?

 

[Akito01]

It is a bit tricky when it comes to nonconsent stories on this site. I've been humming and hawing about a nonconsent story involving a married couple, where the wife is indifferent about sex, and the husband finally gets fed up enough to simply take what he wants. It's not too hard to work that into a sex-as-punishment story, but it might still be too white bread for the kind of scenario you describe. If the story is too extreme, it probably won't be accepted.

 

[pop_54]

Yeppers

I've thought of this one as well nascar mate, but it is a bit too extreme for here.

My tale was to be based on a factual event locally to us, a guy caught his wife out cheating on him with other guy's, she wouldn't listen to reason when he challenged her and she kept doing it.

Eventually he got fed up with her behaviour with all the gossip and embarrassment and had her gang raped as a punishment by a load of rough guy's he knew.

Trouble is to make it hot enough for real forced sex cat. it gets a bit too scary for Lit posting.

pops...........

 

[wishfulthinking]

Just browsing through (supposed to be studying!), and thought I might make a suggestion.

From a readers pov re non-consent, it usually follows the idea, whatever the scenario, that even if the person didn't want to do anything to start with, eventually comes to like it despite themselves.

If I was reading it, I would like something to happen with the boy she was looking at. Maybe the boy rapes her, then when her father finds out, he punishes her too. I say this because I don't think I would find it erotic between her and her father, unless there is a strong suggestion that he punishes her because he loves her, and sometimes this shows in his actions.

Also, you still need to be plausible. Instead of the stork, maybe she believes that children come from marriage. It doesn't necessarily follow that she would know that they are created from more than simply marriage vows, or a union being blessed by god.