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Weird Harold

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This thread is for nominations of stories for discussion in this forum.

1: Only the story's author may nominate a story.

2: Each author may only nominate one story until that story has been discussed. Once a story has been discussed, the author may nominate a second story.

3: At least intitially, the stories nominated here will be taken in the order nominated at the rate of one story per month. If the nominations warrant, more frequent discussions or random selection may be implemented.

4: Please provide title, category, and link to the story.
 
Okay, so I changed my mind. It's a muffin's perogative. And this story wasn't available a few months ago.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=16218

It's called Losing Pieces of You and it's in the Lesbian Sex category. What makes it more interesting, other than the fact that it's probably a better story than The Gathering Night, is that I wrote it in second person with intentional tense shifting and fuzzy grammar.

Ahhh, Muff the hypocrite strikes again! Sheesh. Hey, only one word came back No Suggestions for Spell Check.

I forgot, did I even give my characters names? I don't think so...

[Edited by KillerMuffin on 06-03-2001 at 12:36 AM]

[Scheduled for discussion beginning 11 June 2001]
 
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Harold, I changed my mind. Instead of 'A Blue Million Miles', could I nominate chapter 1 of Madonna: The REAL Girlie Show, in the Celebrities category? That's one I've not really received much feedback on yet. I wrote that, and the next two chapters in an enthusiastic burst of energy. It usually takes me longer to write a story but I was quite pleased with the results of writing quickly in the Kerouac stylee.

[Scheduled for discussion beginning 25 June 2001]
 
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College Days

I would really appreciate your considered opinions about this story.

I'll admit it isn't my personal favourite but Laurel gave it an 'E' and it did top the Top List for a day.

It is quite long.

[Removed from nomination by author's request]

[Edited by Weird Harold on 05-20-2001 at 11:10 AM]
 
I'd like to nominate my story "Ruby's Interview" which I posted a few days ago - its in the 'group sex' category.

Its my first one, so I need all the feedback I can get, to help me develop as a writer.

:) Cathy

[scheduled for discussion beginning 02 July 2001]
 
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Hey, all ya'll don't forget to participate in the discussion! This isn't one sided here! If you want to see your story run, that's great'n all, but at least have the decency to participate! You may not be Tolstoy but you are a reader and that's who is doing the discussing, not authors, readers!
 
OMG! I am SO blind. I didn't even realize this BB was here (yes, I am slightly retarded).

Here's my second attempt at writing. I've gotten some feedback on it but would love to hear some nitty gritty 'loved it because', 'hated it because'. Please please please consider this a nomination.

Story Name: Nellie's New Master
Section: Interracial
Author: Me

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10211

Bye Bye now, off to read stories to be discussed.

[Selected for discussion beginning 09 July 2001]
 
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Author: Me, Myself, and Britney Spears (kidding)
Title: White Out
Link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=1130

Reason: I get limited feedback on this story which was my first ever story to hit #1 on the top lists way back before Laurel and Manu changed the Top Lists to their current format...

[schedulred for discussion beginning 27 Aug 2001]
 
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Blah. You're right AT. I need to keep my big bitchy mouth shut. WH and christo are on top of things and they certainly don't need my help.

I normally don't edit my posts when I've retracted or recanted, but in this case, I think leaving it is more detrimental.

So, how about a pretty please? Please join in the discussions with us? They're fun, don't require you to be a superior author, only an interested reader.

[Edited by KillerMuffin on 04-20-2001 at 09:36 AM]
 
KM - if you're trying to drum up trade I think you're going about it in the wrong way. I have to admit that I find the way you keep laying down laws in this forum more off-putting than encouraging.

I've participated in a couple of discussions but the majority have been in the Incest category or have been multi-chapter stories which I'm not interested in discussing.

I'll become involved in more discussions when some other categories of story appear.
 
I have been participating here and in the feedback circle. I cannot read every story all the time, but I sure do try.

At this point, does it matter anyway?? Those who are participating don't have any more of a chance of their story being picked for review or discussion, than those who don't participate. (see WH's discussion of how stories will be picked)

I'll keep coming anyway, because the truth is, I have learned here, and hope to keep learning. :)
 
Haha. Sorry about my last post, KM. I don't respond well to nagging. I have joined in a couple of times, by the way. It's just that I'm too lazy to read the multi-chapter stories and I prefer not to read the Incest stories, which most of the chosen stories seem to have been.

But I'm psyching myself up for Monday's story as we speak. :)
 
Re: Persephone's story

Persephone wrote: "I'll nominate my story http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10697, Title: I Done A Bad, Bad Thing By Persephone, Erotic Coupling"

I really enjoyed the story. The only part that jarred a little was the para

"I think I was still coming when his cock returned, thick and heated, to push deep inside me. Boyd's lust had reached the point of no control. I was almost frightened by the intensity of his need, the strength of his drive. He grunted as he shoved even deeper inside. He was using me for his own gratification and somehow this aroused me immensely. Using me, using my female body to assuage himself as a male. Using me with no regard now for my wants, needs. Using me impersonally."

The language used here seemed in marked contrast to the folksy dropping-the-trailing-d's style of the rest of the story. Maybe it's just me, but I somehow don't see the blue-collar country girl in the story casually using words like "gratification" and "assuage." But a marvellous story overall.

A question to other readers: how picky are you about punctuation? In general I'd expect apostrophes for the elided trailing ds (i.e., and with the trailing d elided becomes an' ) -- but in this story, leaving out the apostrophes seemed to work fine; in fact, putting them in everywhere might have the effect of being intrusive and distracting. How do others feel about things like that?

CookieMonster
[who would now like to bring up his story for discussion: Desert Encounter: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=12762 (non-consent; rape).]

[Scheduled for Discussion 03 Sep 2001]
 
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my story "extra marital affair"

hi,
i would like to nominate my story for discussion.
susan.
 
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=13395

I suppose I'd best bite the bullet and get my name down here. It'll be a year before anyone looks at it at this rate, but I'm a patient sort *grins* usually patient, that is.

The story is called 'Dark Seduction', and it's in the nonconsent category. Do your best to pick me apart when we get to it. I have a VERY tough hide.

Thanks!

Mickie
 
I used to be shy then I came here.

I would like to see what people think of my short humerotic story: You Don't Send Me E-Mails Anymore. I had a blast writing this story.

http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=10526

Thanks for considering this story. Private feedback is also very welecome.
 
Harold, I changed my mind. Instead of 'A Blue Million Miles', could I nominate chapter 1 of Madonna: The REAL Girlie Show, in the Celebrities category? That's one I've not really received much feedback on yet. I wrote that, and the next two chapters in an enthusiastic burst of energy. It usually takes me longer to write a story but I was quite pleased with the results of writing quickly in the Kerouac stylee.
 
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I'd be interested in getting others' opinions on my story as well, "The Wild Woods". It's in the NonHuman category, but as violent as it is...well, I'm sure that some people would have a lot of not-so-nice things to say.

Chrisa
 
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