Noir City

[lilguy]

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/4484

New Story. Like some of my other start with 4 choices of feamale charcter, with some extra choice you can ask


Accept differnt it a mystery about Detetives getting killed. Also sense it done in Film Noir style its in 3rd person but interuputed by narrations in first person by the charcter. So the first person speeches would like this

He walked down the street = 3rd person

(I walked down the street)= first person


now you may ask how the heck you do a mytery on chyoo, an interactive story where people make there own choice on how the story goes

Well ever see CLUE. How it was mystery but still had multiple explanation for the clues. So had multiple ending, one where a differnt person was the murderer

Same with this
Althought got my own ending in my head

 

[wicker]

It had been a long day at the office napping in my office with my feet propped up on my desk. my hat titled forward over my eyes, and a racing form folded across my lap as I leaned back in my chair. I hadn't had a case in weeks, then she walked in.

She was the stuff a lonely single guy's dreams are made of. Thick, black, wavy hair, piercing blue eyes like polished diamonds reflecting an April sky, a body more curvy than a lazy river and gams that went on for days.

Noir enough for ya?

 

[lilguy]

yup stuff like that

 

[Zingiber]

Interesting idea. A little rougher than, say, the other noir-ish detective romance, Love Under GrAy Skies?

Best of luck with the new story!

-Z

 

[amalgam]

It had been a long day at the office napping in my office with my feet propped up on my desk. my hat titled forward over my eyes, and a racing form folded across my lap as I leaned back in my chair. I hadn't had a case in weeks, then she walked in.

She was the stuff a lonely single guy's dreams are made of. Thick, black, wavy hair, piercing blue eyes like polished diamonds reflecting an April sky, a body more curvy than a lazy river and gams that went on for days.

How come you don't normally write like that?

 

[wicker]

short attention span

 

[amalgam]

hahahahaa

 

[lilguy]

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61465/61085


Oh gunde added a new male charcter

 

[lilguy]

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61698/61085

gunde added another continuing his story

 

[lilguy]

Gunde been on a bit of tear

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61709/61085

Peter meet Kelly Wong a detetive. I added to it and then he added another



http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/61710/61085
He enjoys Bambi. I added one and he added another

 

[lilguy]

oh added to every charcter to flex out each story

Also even got one where Mary and Lester walking around naked.

 

[RicoLouis]

Lisa Bomb- stands 6.4
Bambi- 6.2
May Belle- 6.2
Kelly Wong- 6.4

Sounds like a line up for a female basketball team. : )

 

[lilguy]

are you suggesting my women may not be realistic


HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!!!




like tall chicks who manage to be womanly

 

[RicoLouis]

I am more fond of short chicks but thats just my taste.

 

[lilguy]

hey add a short chick if you want to the extra charcter portion.


Up to you

 

[lilguy]

added this to the info section


Clue

Here some clues that were created in the storyline so far. Note if you can always start your own storyline and the clue will be different, maybe even the solution. But here some clues so Far. Note there spoilers


1) The Corzine Family and the Asian Mob working together to run and Opium and prostitution ring. There planning something else big. The involve people high up, senators, mayors and police, something that could change the world

2) A detective found out bout the plan and was murdered. He sent out info to different detective. The two crime familes don’t know which and been

3) The Killer is actually working for the crime family. Her name is Sinclair. She was given a drug that made her nearly unkillble also made her easy to be controlled by the crime familes. They also have her Daughter held hostage. Cause while mind control she not a proficant killer so they need some other colataral

4) Detetive Peter Bradley knew the girl when he was young, before he left the city. She was always tall, and had been abuse by her father. Her father end up getting beaten to death and she disappeared.

5) Captain Chester Limburg is in the Corzines Back pokcet