no story idea here, but I need help

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maybe this is the wrong board, but usually, I only post here, and since it is about a story idea ...

I am working on a story, where a teacher has sex with a (former) pupil.

However I don't live in the USA, so I don't know much about the american school system. But the story itself happens in the USA, so ....

So, my problem is: This teacher is somewhere between 45 to 55. But the pupil ... I guess he is between 18 to 21. If he is still in school, what kind of school would that be ? High school ? College ?

However, I think I would be better, if this guy already left school 1 or 2 years ago, so back when he was at school, he was somewhere between 16 to 18 (But as I said, nowadays, he is between 18 to 21). So could this teacher be his old high school teacher ?

How old are you, when you leave highschool, and how old are you, when you enter or leave College ?
 
In the US, it's generally 18 when one finishes HS and begins college, but it's not INCREDIBLY unusual for students to graduate from HS a year or two early.
 
Star of Penumbra said:
In the US, it's generally 18 when one finishes HS and begins college, but it's not INCREDIBLY unusual for students to graduate from HS a year or two early.

This is quite true. It might work better to have the student either in Junior College which would make him 18-20 or returning to his high school for some reason after he has graduated.
 
Jenny _S said:
This is quite true. It might work better to have the student either in Junior College which would make him 18-20 or returning to his high school for some reason after he has graduated.

He doesn't have to be a pupil anymore.

It should be like: Hey, Mrs Miller, do you remember me ? You've been my teacher on high school, 2 years ago ... There is no school in this story, just a teacher and one of her former pupils ...

thanks so far
 
Keep in mind your student must be at least 18 or Literotica will reject the story when you submit it. I used a narrator of 14 in one of my stories and had written a shower masturbation scene and since the character was underage, the story was refused. By excising that scene, the story (The Blues Revisited) was later accepted.

Just a little tip to help you learn from my mistakes.
 
MalePatternBoldness said:
Keep in mind your student must be at least 18 or Literotica will reject the story when you submit it. I used a narrator of 14 in one of my stories and had written a shower masturbation scene and since the character was underage, the story was refused. By excising that scene, the story (The Blues Revisited) was later accepted.

Just a little tip to help you learn from my mistakes.

Thanks for the tip, but of course I know about the Lit Rule.

I thought about something like: the guy (20) says to the teacher: Remember, back in High school, you have been the teacher and I was your pupil. Now, let's try something new: you are the pupil, and I am your teacher .... your sex teacher ....

I guess, this shouldn't cause any problems ....
 
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A good possible ploy would be that the protagonist is a college student who is returning to his high school to do his student teaching/observation.

This leaves the door open for him to run into a former teacher.

As a former Education major I should note that they try to make sure that you DON'T end up in one of your previous schools. SO you will have to have a plausible tag to hang this off of - paperwork error - computer burp etc........

EKVITKAR
 
thanks EKVITKAR for the suggestion.

But I already planed most of the plot.

Well, I don't want to tell you too much about it, but the plot is: this teacher is swimming in a lake. She is very open minded, because back when she was young, she was a hippie (she visited Woodstock, smoked pot .... you know what I mean). So she is on this lake, and since it's in a remote area, she is skinny dipping.
Suddenly, in the middle of the lake, she notices that she ain't alone ... there is one of her former pupils/students (I am not sure what would be better: pupil or student ?) While they are still swimming they start to talk and after some time, they exit the lake ... but before that, the student tells the teacher that he is skinny dipping ... but since she is nude, too, she has no problem with that ....
At first the student tries to remain cool, but then, he sees how the woman gets out of the water. Even though she is in her 50s, she is still very hot - and she has pierced nipples ... so when the student sees that, he becomes horny ....


But your idea sounds interesting, too .... you should write a story with your plot ...
 
In America, its students. I like the idea of meeting her in the lake like that. Adds... a freshness to it that is most alluring.
One thing- with the peirced nipples she'd have to have worn either really baggy or thick cloths to school or a rather thick bra.
:kiss: Vix
 
Vixandra said:
In America, its students. I like the idea of meeting her in the lake like that. Adds... a freshness to it that is most alluring.
One thing- with the peirced nipples she'd have to have worn either really baggy or thick cloths to school or a rather thick bra.
:kiss: Vix

I am no expert when it comes to nipple piercings. Maybe they are very new ... back when the guy was her student, she didn't have them.

An alternative could be: she has her pussy pierced, instead of her nipples. Just think ... she gets out of the water, and the student thinks: "don't look at her pussy, don't look at her pussy ..."

But when he sees that she is shaved, he takes a long look. And then, he sees how the sunlight is reflected from the rings through her pussy lips. Or maybe she just sits on the beach, with her legs open ....
 
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