No idea what to call this:

[Yerkiddin]

Two bi women, Joyce and Mary, are having an affair, and are generally very happy, but while they are both bi, one is far more inclined to enjoy women, and the other wants a man kinda frequently. While toys help, the second woman just can't seem to stay happy without something her mate does not have to give. Most of their many friends are straight women, as Joyce is a little jealous.

Mary meets a guy, Danny, that is nice looking, a bit younger, and quite shy and awkward around women. After introducing him to her Joyce, Mary suggests a 3some, first to Joyce in private, and then to Danny with Joyce there. The first problem isn't obvious, but Joyce is a big passive-aggressive, and while she has agreed to adding Danny, she does not want him in their relationship.

Soon, the couple have Danny over regularly to sleep with them, but they all 3 work, and with the shifts the way they are, Danny and Joyce are home before Mary almost every evening. One evening, Danny (for some reason) gets a shower just after he arrives, and has come out in just a towel around his waist, when one of Joyce's friends comes over and comes right in without knocking, catching Danny not-really-dressed. In his haste to get up, Danny actually loses his towel, much to the friend's amusement. Joyce notices her friend likes what she sees, and that Danny blushes just about everywhere, and gets an idea.

From this point on, Joyce does all she can to show Danny off to all of their straight friends, in hopes that one will sweep him out the door and out of her life. If this doesn't work, she does her best to get tasteful pictures of him onto the net with contact information... (maybe this last is done by getting some pictures of the 3 of them onto facebook, but cropping her and Mary out for whatever single's ad, such that anyone could have done that.)

Soon, shy-but-hunky Danny has women coming from just about anywhere, trying to seduce him.

Could this work? Are there holes I'm not seeing?

 

[LWulf]

First, Joyce doesn't sound bi at all, either that or she's extremely picky about her men.

Second this doesn't sound like a sex is going to be fun, but more of a "train wreck ahead!" story. Nothing wrong with that, drama works too, but stating the obvious sometimes clears the air for other thoughts to come out.

Third, Joyce doesn't sound "slightly" jealous, but full tilt, head over heels, green eyed devil jealous. I'm a little confused. They have mostly straight female friends because Joyce is jealous of Mary being near straight men, or bi/lesbian women (or both???)? Also, unless Mary is a wall flower, why hasn't she been making friends with straight guys before? If Joyce has been grenade-ing previous relationships with Mary and male friends, then we are onto a patterned behavior, which makes her problem much deeper. Danny would thus be the latest in a long line of manipulative behavior for Joyce.

Getting "tasteful" pictures of Danny to post on the net (even with cropping out Joyce and Mary), isn't that hard to figure out where the photo was taken, and therefore guess it was either Joyce or Mary who is spreading his photo around. If I got a hella lot of women contacting me, knowing my particulars (and unless I posted my phone number on the ladies' room wall) I'd start asking around "where did you get my number???" I mean it's great to suddenly become popular, but it'd make me ask questions.
When I did suspect it was either Joyce or Mary, or both, I'd either pout (withdraw, distance myself, avoid those two) or confront directly. If I talked with Joyce first, she might try to pass it off as a consensus decision that Mary and Joyce liked him, but decided to (kick him to the curb (politely)) by finding someone else for him. If patterned behavior for Joyce, this always worked with the previous male friends Mary made. But the story is about Danny for a reason, so perhaps he's the first to then talk with Mary and ask why?

That's when the meadow muffins really hits the fan!

Also, if a picture is of Joyce, Mary and Danny, then who took the pictures? Understand, I'm still green to the "selfie-stick" concept.

Lastly, it sounds like Joyce is older than Mary, who sounds like she just wants to have fun. Either that or Mary wants the relationship with Joyce to end and is looking for someone/anyone else to be with. Joyce sounds very manipulative by trying to grenade any alternate relationships for Mary, then saying "Oh, you poor dear, I told you he seemed like all the others, bangs you then moves on; hunting for another naive person to bang." All the while trying to make it so Mary ends up staying with her...

 

[yukonnights]

Two bi women, Joyce and Mary, are having an affair, and are generally very happy, but while they are both bi, one is far more inclined to enjoy women, and the other wants a man kinda frequently. While toys help, the second woman just can't seem to stay happy without something her mate does not have to give. Most of their many friends are straight women, as Joyce is a little jealous.

Mary meets a guy, Danny, that is nice looking, a bit younger, and quite shy and awkward around women. After introducing him to her Joyce, Mary suggests a 3some, first to Joyce in private, and then to Danny with Joyce there. The first problem isn't obvious, but Joyce is a big passive-aggressive, and while she has agreed to adding Danny, she does not want him in their relationship.

Soon, the couple have Danny over regularly to sleep with them, but they all 3 work, and with the shifts the way they are, Danny and Joyce are home before Mary almost every evening. One evening, Danny (for some reason) gets a shower just after he arrives, and has come out in just a towel around his waist, when one of Joyce's friends comes over and comes right in without knocking, catching Danny not-really-dressed. In his haste to get up, Danny actually loses his towel, much to the friend's amusement. Joyce notices her friend likes what she sees, and that Danny blushes just about everywhere, and gets an idea.

From this point on, Joyce does all she can to show Danny off to all of their straight friends, in hopes that one will sweep him out the door and out of her life. If this doesn't work, she does her best to get tasteful pictures of him onto the net with contact information... (maybe this last is done by getting some pictures of the 3 of them onto facebook, but cropping her and Mary out for whatever single's ad, such that anyone could have done that.)

Soon, shy-but-hunky Danny has women coming from just about anywhere, trying to seduce him.

Could this work? Are there holes I'm not seeing?

Have you worked it backward to forward? So once Danny has women coming at him from everywhere —> what happens ? Does Joyce's ploy work? Does it blow-up in her face with Danny and Mary running off together? Is Joyce sorry and repentant for the mess and tries to work it all out with Mary & Danny?

I don't really see the ending in what you sketched out. The ending could be;
1. Danny hooks up with a new woman.
2. Mary finds out what Joyce is doing, gets mad and dumps her and Danny.
3.Danny gets really big-headed being so popular that both Joyce and Mary can't stand him and give him two boots out of their lives … and live happily ever after.
4. Danny becomes a chick magnet and brings lots of new eager women to come over and play with him, Mary and Joyce.
5. ? and probably a few other endings are possible.

Try working it from the end back and see if things clear up

 

[sirhugs]

Joyce does find someone to take Danny away, and then she discovers that SHE, not Mary, is the one who misses Danny...

 

[Yerkiddin]

I don't really see the ending in what you sketched out. The ending could be;
1. Danny hooks up with a new woman.
2. Mary finds out what Joyce is doing, gets mad and dumps her and Danny.
3.Danny gets really big-headed being so popular that both Joyce and Mary can't stand him and give him two boots out of their lives … and live happily ever after.
4. Danny becomes a chick magnet and brings lots of new eager women to come over and play with him, Mary and Joyce.
5. ? and probably a few other endings are possible.

Try working it from the end back and see if things clear up

Actually, ending #4 would be the one I could wish on the characters. Pretty much any of the others would be more likely, I would think.

Lwulf brought up pictures. My thought was that Mary and Joyce have a joint facebook account, but that Joyce is taking pictures *from those posted already on facebook* and cropping and reposting them as a singles ad for Danny that Danny does not know about. This works better if Danny has any sort of business such that he is already publishing his phone number.

I'm still pondering this, as well as your feedback. Thanks!

Sirhugs: Your ending is also good!