No Escape

Asa

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This is a rather Dark sl but just one that sprung to mind a while back. So far here are the parts taken and by whom it is by invite or PM me with a ct idea...

The boyfriend ~ Promethus 2
The Older brother ~ Promethus 2
A few of the brothers friends ~ Available ((looking for maybe 2 or 3 people here maybe more who have either rented a room in a real dive of a hotel in town or one of the buddies apartment fo rth eactula rape so that they can video tape it))
A cop ~ Available ((Young cop a little crooked or Old fat greasy cop who has a thing against most other races))
Male Nurse ~ Remec
and The uncle ~ Remec
all those people getting to have "Fun" with some young girl helpless to stop them and maybe just maybe actually wanting more than one of them deep down.


Summary of story roughly

Young girl and her boyfriend go out for her 18th B day planning on it being there first time together sexually her first time ever.

Big brother has wanted his sister since she first blossomed into her "adult" body especially to be the one to take her virginity

So brother and some of his buddies jump the young couple wearing masks of course and make the boyfriend watch her get raped...

IF he gets her to a cop after the attack the cop decided to take advantage of the situation and sends the boyfriend to the hospital and takes the girl as well before taking her home after she is done at the hospital

At the hospital a male nurse seeing how quickly the meds affect her petiete form and having been the one that had to help her into the gown due to the hospital being EXTREMELY short handed Him taking advantae of the situation as well.

Once home she tells her Uncle what happened her medication induced ramblings of what all these peole hae done to her or made her do gets him turned on and once her meds have her very well drugged they take sexual advantage of her


And now begins the story...


~Loredana~

Romanian
5'8"
Long Raven hair with mold natural curl that just eems to give it bounce and body as well as a very soft caress me look
Dark Deep rich brown eyes
Fully pouty lips
Slender form with 38C 25 34

~She prepared intently for her date, the soft black/red/silver dress that she had made following the free flowing patterns of Gypsy dresses her mother had taught her the top of the dress hung off one shoulder as was its design and only adding to the exotic air of mystery around her.
Her hair left full other than a silver clip to keep it out ofher eyes a little.
Strappy black Sandals a matching black demi bra and thong set.
Soft scent f her favorite homemade perfume jasmine with a touch of lilac and lotus.
Preparing he rmake up just right never too heavy due to her already oliveish tan skin. A soft but rich red lipstick and she was ready to go.

Loredana and her brother have lived with their Uncle Since Lore was about 7 years old. Their parents died when the little shop they ren causght fire several years ago. Lore had learned early from her mother how to make prefume and Traditional Romanian and Gypsy Jewelry and cloths. Her older brother had barely survived the fire and luckily their uncle stepped up to take them in with him as the state was going to send them to seperate foster homes.

Walking down the stairs she glanced around to see if her Uncle "Bob" as the Americans he worked with calle him. He seemed to prefer having taken on an American name when he and the family had left Romainia. He was her fathers youngest brother and one of the few family she had left living in America*

Unkal... Brotheer? *Her accent very thick and seductive even with her still innocent and a virgin but tonight that was going to change she and the young man she had been seeing for a few years now were now that she was 18 going to give themselves to each other and she could barely wait. THey had teased each other and at times lately there was some rather heavy petting and fondling but tonight... After the movie adn their usualwalk inteh park for him to explain any questions she had about the movie then off to Dinner and then his house. Her uncle worked Graveyard shift so she would be home long before him and even if she wasn't he would most likely be drinking or passed out drunk. After the loss of his second wife he had slipped into a strange mental state graveyard shift at work prostitutes and booze. SHe worried about him at times but there was a woman he worked with that had promised Loredana to keep an eye on him for her.

SHe went to look out the window to see if her date was here yet or if anyone was home*
 
"Bob"

OOC:
"Bob"
6'0" 220#
Dark, greasy, black hair
Olive complexion
Thin moustache and devilish goatee

Tries to appear Americanized, but hasn't been entirely successful. Is tall and broad-shouldered, but has developed a slight paunch from the combination of a mostly sedentary job and an overdoing of American food and cheap beer.

*********

Early in the evening, Bob...as he preferred to be called...had a vague sense of something going on in the house. The sound was subtle and muted, and he couldn't place it at first. He sat up in his bed, yawning and scratching himself idly across the chest.

A shower. That's what it was. Nodding to himself, he remembered he'd given Loredana permission to go out for her birthday since he'd been unable to get the night off from work and she seemed to want to go out with her nice American boyfriend.

Moving out into the hall, Bob got himself a towel from the linen closet since he needed to take a shower as well. He hoped the hot water held out, then heard the shower in the common bath stop. {Good...by time I am actually getting in shower, water will be hot enough again...} he thought as he walked by, the warmth of the steam tickling his feet as it escaped from the partially ajar bathroom door.

Bob stopped. Turning his head, he glanced along the edge of the cracked door and saw the naked form of Loredana in the mirror as she dried her self off. Not for the first time did he let his hand go to his crotch and stroked himself at thoughts of his niece and what she might be letting that boyfriend do to her.

She turned and he scurried off into his own room, deciding to grab clothes and shower at the locker room at work. He did not trust himself to be here alone with Loredana just now. Waiting until he was certain she'd gone into her room, Bob hustled himself down to his car and drove off.

His cock screamed in his head the whole time.
 
Adam Jackson

OOC: Tall lanky
5'11", 175 lbs
blonde shoulder length hair
Blue eyes
slow to anger, patient
intuitive, phylisophical

IC: Adam had risen early on the day of Lore's 18th birthday He needed to make this day perfect for her. He dressed quickly and left the house quietly so as to not disturb his sleeping parents. Outside he jumped in his chevy pickup and headed for the park to wash it.

His truck wasn't anything fancy, dented and dinged ten years old but it was transportion and Lore didn't seem to mind riding in it when they went out for burgers and frys, or parking at inspiration point overlooking the lake that was at the edge of town.

He smiled thinking about last night. Like so many other nights before as their relationship developed, they had been so hot for each other, steaming up the windows with their passion, twisting and turning in the seat trying to get closer together as they made out. God, how he had wanted her. They decided to wait until she was 18, a woman.

She had her reasons for this and he had respected them. He had his reasons too. he wanted it to be perfect not in his truck perched on a cliff, not in his little bedroom at home with his parents downstairs, but in a big wide bed, with soft music in the background, flowers and maybe some wine.

He didn't have much money but a friend had told him about a cheap hotel on the waterfront, no questions asked, twenty dollars up front and it was theirs for the night. Then he could make love with her the way it should be done. They had laughed, joked, about it, playfully touching, stroking, teasing each other with their hands and mouths , But when they were so damned hot they felt they didn't want to stop they did.

Lore had taken Adams hand and placed it between her legs sguezing her thighs together Adam had felt the wetness of her panties, caught the aroma of her heated pussy and saw the need in her eyes.

Adanm had placed Lore's hand inside his unzippered pants letting her feel how hard and ready he was. She could feel the urgent throbbing through the fabric of his underwear.

"Tomorrow" they had said in unison. Tomorrow we'll have what we've been waiting for."

Adam smiled again, it was tomorrow finally after all those nights waiting it was finally tomorrow. He whistled as he left the park and headed for the liquor store for wine, to the flower shop where he had ordered flowers and to another store to buy one of Lore's favorite cds for tonight. the
florist looked at him rather strangly when he gave the address the flowers were to be sent to but shrugged his shoulders "Young love" he said under his breath.

It was noon and Adam found himself back at the park watching the ducks in the lake daydreaming about tonight with Lore when he fell asleep.

He awoke with a start he'd bettter hurry, He sped
home showered, dresssed. Black slacks and shoes, white shirt sport jacket, ran a comb through his hair and headed for Lores house.

She was as eager as he was as she ran from her house toward the truck where he stood waiting holding the door open for her. "Damn Lore you're beautiful!"

Hadn't he noticed it before he wondered he always thought she was cute or pretty but ...she was certainly the woman of his dreams. He kissed her to see if this was really hapening to him to them at last. As he went around the car. he glanced at the house and swa the curtain move and a figure behind it walk away.

"Lore's brother,"' he thought "He was a strange one." They didn't hang out with the same gang so he didn't know him very well, but he had heard stories about him. He shuddered not even wanting to go there, to think about it on this very special night. As soon as he could he was going to take her away from that place where she lived with her uncle and brother. He didn't like the idea of that at all.

He felt Lore's hand on his knee. "What's the matter Adam. she said tentatively. She had a way of telling when he was thinking dark thoughts.

"Nothing," Adam replied. His hand went to cover hers and gave it a squeeze. Shall we get a burger and some fries before we....

Lore giggled. "Before we what?" she teased.
 
~Loredana~

*Smiling to him innocently. They had waited a long time for this and not even her brother or uncle trying to creep him out would stop them. Curling against his shoulder as they drove down the road she smiled a "quick dinner" might be best after all as the air around them seemed Very "charged" with what they both wanted so very badly for so very long*
 
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