Newlywed young Japanese wife getting seduced by their really dirty old neighbor!

[kkit]

Hi all,

I'm hoping someone would be interested in writing up a story of a newlywed japanese couple that have just resided to america from Japan. The young japanese wife then gets seduced by their really dirty old man next door.

I think he should be a nasty fucker, bitter and twisted. Lots of rough sex and humiliation. Popping round to fuck her over the kitchen table while her husbands out at the walmart for 15 minutes. Alot scenes having her service him while her unsuspecting husband is nearby. Also scene where the faithful young wife loses her mind and begging the old man to fuck her more and more.

I really hope someone would be interested in this idea and would be looking forward to discussing the story line together.

Also if this could be done into series would be greatly appreciated!!!

Thanks

Bobby

 

[fogbank]

Sounds like a good scenario -- I'm not much of a fan of cuckold stories, but this one could be good. I'd wonder about exactly how the seduction happens--what does the wife see in this dirty american guy? I think it would be most interesting to tell the story from her perspective.

 

[kkit]

Thank you for your interest in my story idea.

About how will the seduction take place. I was hoping if you could come up with some ideas of it and discuss it together.

Long ago I was really interested in the story "Lynne" written by "The Englishman", maybe you have heard of it ? Is a story about how the husband's boss slowly seduced the young wife. Maybe you would be interested in taking a look at it and see what other similar or better seduction you can think of.

Also I was hoping the young wife would be unwilling at first, but then slowly become willingly.

 

[kkit]

No one is interested in this story idea ?

 

[Gringao]

No one is interested in this story idea ?

I might be interested if it's not some racist thing motivating the idea.

 

[kkit]

anyone ?

 

[msboy8]

I might be interested if it's not some racist thing motivating the idea.

Why didn't you answer Gringao's question, kkit?

 

[Gringao]

Why didn't you answer Gringao's question, kkit?

He did, it's fine. I'm interested in writing a story, but to be honest, I'm swamped right now.

 

[msboy8]

He did, it's fine. I'm interested in writing a story, but to be honest, I'm swamped right now.

OK thanks, I'll put it on my 'To Write' list, hehe.

 

[kkit]

still not much people interested

 

[BedtimeStories]

still not much people interested

For me, I guess it's just the thought that the neighbor is "dirty" and "gross". I just can't get into it. Sorry.

 

[rosco rathbone]

-what does the wife see in this dirty american guy?.

That's where you lose me too. Maybe he is the landlord and they can't the rent or something.

 

[kkit]

Why isn't there more people that could be interested in this story idea. Old man digging young house wife...... isn't really that bad is it ?

 

[kkit]

The american old man being the landlord sound like a good idea.

 

[BedtimeStories]

Why isn't there more people that could be interested in this story idea. Old man digging young house wife...... isn't really that bad is it ?

To me, yes, I guess. I sure don't mind older men, but if you're thinking 70 or older than I'd have to draw the line.

Also, why does he half to be "dirty" or whatever. Can't he be allowed to shower? lol

 

[msboy8]

Hello,
I believe kkit does not mean "dirty old man" in the same way you are thinking. He means the lustful, fuck anything that's not dead, Scabe kind of "dirty old man".

I happen to know, because I'm one, hehehe. I may be a nice guy, but I'm also a "Scabe", Dirty Old Man.
msboy8

P.S. I've got your idea on my to do list.

 

[BedtimeStories]

Hello,
I believe kkit does not mean "dirty old man" in the same way you are thinking. He means the lustful, fuck anything that's not dead, Scabe kind of "dirty old man".

Well, that's funny. I think of the term "dirty old man" in the way you're saying. Somehow I got the vibe that he meant literally dirty. lol

 

[rydia57]

Why isn't there more people that could be interested in this story idea. Old man digging young house wife...... isn't really that bad is it ?

Lots of people could be interested in your story... only half of them are waiting to see it done, and half of them are maybe writing on something else but would like to see this in print. I'm curious about it myself... got some ideas for it, but like Msboy, I'll put it on my "to write" list. Y'know... if there just coming to america, a young couple will really have money problems. That guy next door could be well endowed financially.... maybe even physically, but he has this leechy yucky personality... you'd only put up with him if you needed the money that bad...

 

[sirhugs]

Lots of people could be interested in your story... only half of them are waiting to see it done, and half of them are maybe writing on something else but would like to see this in print. I'm curious about it myself... got some ideas for it, but like Msboy, I'll put it on my "to write" list. Y'know... if there just coming to america, a young couple will really have money problems. That guy next door could be well endowed financially.... maybe even physically, but he has this leechy yucky personality... you'd only put up with him if you needed the money that bad...

I second that. I am way too busy to write this, but would likely read it.

 

[kkit]

Not just me, but a lot of people is waiting to read this story

 

[Tanuki]

I would give it a go, but I have really bad writer's block.

 

[sirhugs]

I would give it a go, but I have really bad writer's block.

just try the first sentence. Then the second. ......

 

[msboy8]

just try the first sentence. Then the second. ......

I'm going on 2 weeks sabbatical, I'll try to get to it then. Take care Y'all.

 

[rydia57]

Not just me, but a lot of people is waiting to read this story

I've been writing on it, Had to get the names, personaity of the characters and all down. It's becoming fun here. I believe I can actually see the guy! Well, with my description and all.

 

[Never]

rydia57:
"That guy next door could be well endowed financially.... maybe even physically, but he has this leechy yucky personality... you'd only put up with him if you needed the money that bad... "

That's not very original.