Newly Published to Literotica - Feedback Appreciated

[masterandmargarita]

I am very happy to see my first stories have just been approved! My wife is a better writer than I and spent a lot of time helping me with with edits. She is not exactly impartial to the material, though, so that I why I want to open it up to more feedback from other writers.

The stories revolve around an adventurous wife who is constantly finding new ways to share her timid husband with other women. In addition to life experiences, the main influences are CFNM and reverse gangbang porn.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1602870&page=submissions

http://www.literotica.com/s/ladies-cocktail-night-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/ladies-cocktail-night-ch-02

 

[masterandmargarita]

I also was curious if I had categorized my stories correctly. A husband and wife have sex with other women, never just the two of them, therefore I put it in Group Sex. However, that relationship bond being the glue of the story makes me think it should be Loving Wives. I'll have to start reading some Loving Wives stories, but I just assumed they were very romance or monogamy oriented.

 

[lovecraft68]

I also was curious if I had categorized my stories correctly. A husband and wife have sex with other women, never just the two of them, therefore I put it in Group Sex. However, that relationship bond being the glue of the story makes me think it should be Loving Wives. I'll have to start reading some Loving Wives stories, but I just assumed they were very romance or monogamy oriented.

From the description I would go with group, they are by far a friendlier crowd.

The Loving wife section looks for Burn the bitch stories where women either cheat or force their husbands to watch them fuck other men. Their real enjoyment is when something horrible happens to the wife, the more sadistic the better.

Your story does not sound like it would fit. The wife is sharing the husband and although you said timid it does not sound like non consent.

Stick with group, you're better off

 

[masterandmargarita]

Thanks for the tip! Wow, that is a surprise. Who would have thought Loving Wives was the more hardcore category? I'll stick with Group Sex