Newest Stories..opinions welcome!

[kandie]

I have posted many stories on Literotica. I have recently changed editors and would like your honest opinions. I value feedback of all kinds, because without it, I cannot improve my writing skills. I have a new editor now and hope that helps. Take care everyone and thanks for helping me.

This is my newest story called, "Ami." I do not know why they are not posted under the same heading, but that don't bother me as long as they are read. I have got several good replies too, but value author's feedback. Just don't bite too hard, it might hurt my dignity. LOL!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=296108
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=297044
http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=297879

Any other comments on my other stories are appreciated too. Thanks-a-bunch!

 

[kandie]

Be Patient with me please.....

I just discovered an authors worst fear.........I submitted two stories without having my new editor look at them. One was originally wrote in 2002, when I really sucked at writing. The other one, in a hurry, without following my usual routine. Be gentle now, do not cut too deep. My editor already did that and then said, "Cheer up, it happens to the best of us at one time or another. Your writing will improve with time......and patience." He would say that, I have no freaking patience. Thanks for letting me explain things. I am rewriting "His Angel," and Ami maybe all three chapters.

 

[kandie]

Whew!

After turning green and feeling like my stomach would soon be lying at my feet, I buckled down and got to work. I just rewrote "His Angel," and submitted it. Then started working on "Ami chptr 2." Then sent it off send it off to my editor and corrected it and just resubmitted today.

My regular editor is nice and helpful, but does not know diddly squat about wriitng erotica. (sorry hubby.) So I will keep him as my proof read and first editor, mainly because he sits down with me and asks, "What's wrong with that sentence, paragraph or word."

Then I'll send it to AsylumKeeper my newly acquired editor. I must tell you, I love the way he edits thing. He stimulates the authors own mental powers to come up with the correct wording, when errors are made.

Never say, "I never needed an editor, so why start now." Hemingway, had five because it is known his english skills were terrible.

 

[mjl2010]

Read ch 1. Guess I'll wait to vote until your done with it.

MJL