quintessentialquill
Virgin
- Joined
- Dec 3, 2006
- Posts
- 4
Hi All - I posted my first story a few days ago and posted my first message on the bulletin board tonight! Apparently, I'm feeling a surge of confidence with all these new beginnings. Whoo-hoo!
After spending a lot of time learning about writing, practicing and reading lots of Literotica, I finally got the courage to try my hand at writing erotica and I love it! I feel as if I've found myself or 'come out', so to speak. My story seems to have been generally well-received (I think I goofed when trying to reply to a couple of public messages and wound up having to vote for myself... Being new to this, I couldn't figure out how to post a repy w/out voting). I've gotten good ratings, but no feedback. I'd like to become a better writer and, as such, would welcome your (constructive) thoughts/opinions on what I might improve on. I've submitted a second chapter tonight, but for now, here's the link to the first chapter. You may notice long paragraphs in a few areas and I don't know why that happened; everything seemed to be formatted the way it should have been when I submitted the story. Advice on why that happened would be nice, too.
Here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=295360
Thanks in advance for your feedback. So many of you have inspired me (and turned me on!) with your work.
Best,
Quintessential Quill
After spending a lot of time learning about writing, practicing and reading lots of Literotica, I finally got the courage to try my hand at writing erotica and I love it! I feel as if I've found myself or 'come out', so to speak. My story seems to have been generally well-received (I think I goofed when trying to reply to a couple of public messages and wound up having to vote for myself... Being new to this, I couldn't figure out how to post a repy w/out voting). I've gotten good ratings, but no feedback. I'd like to become a better writer and, as such, would welcome your (constructive) thoughts/opinions on what I might improve on. I've submitted a second chapter tonight, but for now, here's the link to the first chapter. You may notice long paragraphs in a few areas and I don't know why that happened; everything seemed to be formatted the way it should have been when I submitted the story. Advice on why that happened would be nice, too.
Here's the link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=295360
Thanks in advance for your feedback. So many of you have inspired me (and turned me on!) with your work.
Best,
Quintessential Quill
