Techfreak_Inc
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i have written this story over and over again, editing it and adding more but right now im at a loss as to what i should do i would greatly appreciate it if someone could help me with it:
THE DESTRUCTION OF THE STATES
The night air was crisp as a tall figure dressed in a long black cloak walked out of the forest and through meddow surounded by norcops trees,where a gigantic air balloon waited.
The balloon was floating ten feet off the ground with long ropes trailling down the sides, staked to the ground with staples.
The cloaked figure yelled something in an anciant language, there was a moments silence... "BANG" a loud pop exploded into the still night air and a oddly glowing rope ladder flew out over the edge of her basket an stopped to rest not half an inch above the ground.
The figure turned around exposing the elongated handsome face of an elf.
Scanning the landscape to check that no one saw the strange happenings that had just previously taken place, he quickly walked back into the surrounding forest.
My name is Lucious Demonican, I was born in the year of our lord 2948. I am the head of the Society of Corpse Animatronix (SCA) and own Techfreak Animatronx Inc. a company that destroys captured shadows and locks away dark necros where they cannot escape to create more havock upon our already crumbling planeta. I have studdied many rare crumbling pages saved from the days when humans in their great discovery of weapons of mass distruction, believed themselfs to control the fate of all living things, and set out to cut each opposing country from the face of the planet, that at that time was known as earth. This is a solid account starting from the time when i was a child to the current days where i now rule the underverse, the only places on earth where humans can survive.
I was 12 years aged in 2960 when the dark lord known as The Black Minstrel called forth the first shadow being from a deep dark pit that had recently been opened in the midst of a lightning storm shaking the country from north to south, east to west....
THE DESTRUCTION OF THE STATES
The night air was crisp as a tall figure dressed in a long black cloak walked out of the forest and through meddow surounded by norcops trees,where a gigantic air balloon waited.
The balloon was floating ten feet off the ground with long ropes trailling down the sides, staked to the ground with staples.
The cloaked figure yelled something in an anciant language, there was a moments silence... "BANG" a loud pop exploded into the still night air and a oddly glowing rope ladder flew out over the edge of her basket an stopped to rest not half an inch above the ground.
The figure turned around exposing the elongated handsome face of an elf.
Scanning the landscape to check that no one saw the strange happenings that had just previously taken place, he quickly walked back into the surrounding forest.
My name is Lucious Demonican, I was born in the year of our lord 2948. I am the head of the Society of Corpse Animatronix (SCA) and own Techfreak Animatronx Inc. a company that destroys captured shadows and locks away dark necros where they cannot escape to create more havock upon our already crumbling planeta. I have studdied many rare crumbling pages saved from the days when humans in their great discovery of weapons of mass distruction, believed themselfs to control the fate of all living things, and set out to cut each opposing country from the face of the planet, that at that time was known as earth. This is a solid account starting from the time when i was a child to the current days where i now rule the underverse, the only places on earth where humans can survive.
I was 12 years aged in 2960 when the dark lord known as The Black Minstrel called forth the first shadow being from a deep dark pit that had recently been opened in the midst of a lightning storm shaking the country from north to south, east to west....
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