Newbie: Sent Back Submissions Query

[steven7393]

Hello im new here though have been an avid reader of literotica.com for many many years now. Maybe even a decade. I lose count.

I have a query

Ive finally decided to embrace the writing bug and have submitted the first two chapters of my short story entitled The Gimp, which is a true life recollection of the very first time I went out on the scene in London

However, it got sent back, much to my dismay. Both sections.

I have checked it for paragraph spacing, content, spell checked and all things that appear necessary but I seem to have passed all of those criteria

So im here to seek some helpful advice please

How do I go about this? Do I submit the story here and hope someone here is kind enough to help or do I engage in conversation with a volunteer? I have chosen the former option at present as I feel the volunteers may be inundated with requests already and if you guys have had the time to read this message then hopefully one of you might have a few more minutes to read my story and advise

Thank you in advance

Kind regards

Steven

 

[NotWise]

However, it got sent back, much to my dismay. Both sections.

I have checked it for paragraph spacing, content, spell checked and all things that appear necessary but I seem to have passed all of those criteria

So im here to seek some helpful advice please

What indication did you get for the problem? Use should have a generic statement from the site.

Check and make sure that the punctuation of your dialogue is within the quotation marks. That is the US standard, and failure to use it is a common cause of bounced stories.

You can post up to three paragraphs of your story here (or in the Story Feedback forum or the Editior's Forum). If you do, make sure the three paragraphs or less are representative and include dialogue.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Then second most common return is under age sex...18 is the age limit here. No sex between anyone under 18 is allowed. You may mention that the first time they experienced sex was at an age under 18 in passing, but no description of sex.

If you click the rejected link it will tell you what the problem is. It will be a generic statement of the problem but it will let you know what you need to do to resubmit.

You may want to take a look here... https://www.literotica.com/subguide.shtml

 

[RejectReality]

This thread also drills down on a lot of rejections, and may be of help.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=175666