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stormygal

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Oct 15, 2001
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hello everyone,

i just posted my first little story its a BDSM one, its under NEW, and its called ..Preperation.

I have quite a few other stories i am hoping to post, its always been just a hobby sending things to my friends and stuff, and i admit to being a little reluctant to throw myself in amongst such talent. But would like some feedback, to improve my writing before i post anymore.

thank you

stormygal
 
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