Newbie in need of editing !

[rot_teufel]

I am a new writer, (failed lit so many years ago) so I need editing help. I have two short stories, (under 1500 words) and one longer(20 chapters) that are ready to edit. I have sent notes to some Vol. Edt. for help, but then found this location so I'm trying here as well. I would like help with grammar, structure and story. If you are interested in editing (hand holding) for a newbie here they are.

Story 1 BDSM short 1500 words simple scene male dom /female sub.

Story 2 short 1500 words Vampire, bondage, forced cum eating F/M done in first person dialogue.

Story 3 17,100 words Sci-Fi, lesbian, sex zombies, forced sex, nuns, non sexual action (guns, fighting)

I will give editors that are interested more background after contact. I would like to submit these stories in the next couple of weeks. Note I have run these through an online computer editor. Also I can provide the documents as Word, Open Office doc, or PDF as required.
Thanks for reading this far.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Okay. Will assist. PM me.