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Una Ryce

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Ok so it rhymes. Kind of.

Hi to Everyone. I'm Una Ryce and i adore writing poetry. I'm not very good at it yet, but i know with the right support i will be able to better my skills and knowledge.

Please read my stuff and comment. PM's are very welcome and so are emails and PC. Anything goes really.

Thank you to those of you who have been very nice to me already. Much appreciated.

U.R.
 
Glad you finally posted, Una. Again, welcome to Lit and keep writing! :)

:rose:
 
saldne said:
Glad you finally posted, Una. Again, welcome to Lit and keep writing! :)

:rose:

Thank you! I'm on infrequently. Life has been keeping me busy. You have been very sweet in welcoming me - thanks.



annaswirls said:
Welcome Una! Keep on writing and reading and reading and writing.....

:rose:

Thank you. I have just read your new poem. Powerful to say the least. In fact i will be reading it again in a minute. You are very good.
 
don't fret the critics, write from the heart (as you do) <grin...
welcome to the literary gaunlet <smile>

gram mer
by My Erotic Tail ©

gram mer

me was telled
words will fell,
if they aint spelt just rite.

that cuntry boy,
with a pincel or pin,
cant rite or tipe.

that skool is fo
me tu lern,
i beter do it rite.

mom said werds
cum from within
and beter grammers hipe.

that if you can read
me hart felt werds,
that wil be alll rite.

Literary Art !
 
Welcome Una, to Lit's fun and oft times fractious community. I see so much raw talent in your writing and hope to see many more offerings of yours as well as being allowed to enjoy the privilege of watching you evolve and develop.

While you're writing, also take the time to read the many good offerings there are here from such as annaswirls, Sara Crewe, TheRainMan, saldne, Wanton Vixxxen, cymry, Wicked Eve, Angeline, My Erotic Trail, bluerains, and the list goes on and on.
 
Welcome to the Poetry Forum, UR. Much can be learned here if you do not take a lot of it too seriously. That goes for the advice as well as the barbs, jabs, and insults too! ;)

One piece of advice that is often repeated to new poets (and that is because it is true) is to keep reading as well as writing. I recommend at least three times as much reading as writing for a young novice. - Learn what you like before you try to write it.

A second good practice is not to rush a poem to submission. Rather, set a new poem aside for up to a month or more. Leave it alone until you can read it with an unbiased eye, that is until you can look at it as you would look at a work that you had not written. If then you see nothing that you want to change, it is ready to meet the public, but probably not before.
:rose: :) :rose:
 
Welcome to the poetry forum. You're a brave one to start a thread after all the arguing here of late. I'm glad you did. :)

Stick around, post in the threads and join the contests. Like LeBroz said, this can be a fractious place, but everyone here shares your love of poetry and writing.

:rose:
 
The others have already said all I was going to say.

So...um...hi! :)
 
Una Ryce said:
Ok so it rhymes. Kind of.

Hi to Everyone. I'm Una Ryce and i adore writing poetry. I'm not very good at it yet, but i know with the right support i will be able to better my skills and knowledge.

Please read my stuff and comment. PM's are very welcome and so are emails and PC. Anything goes really.

Thank you to those of you who have been very nice to me already. Much appreciated.

U.R.

hi Una welcome to Litland. enjoy your stay. :)
 
My Erotic Trail said:
don't fret the critics, write from the heart (as you do) <grin...
welcome to the literary gaunlet <smile>

gram mer
by My Erotic Tail ©

gram mer

me was telled
words will fell,
if they aint spelt just rite.

that cuntry boy,
with a pincel or pin,
cant rite or tipe.

that skool is fo
me tu lern,
i beter do it rite.

mom said werds
cum from within
and beter grammers hipe.

that if you can read
me hart felt werds,
that wil be alll rite.

Literary Art !


From the heart it is! I know no other way. Although i need to learn more skill and knowledge and that's where the head features! thank you for the welcome :)
 
LeBroz said:
Welcome Una, to Lit's fun and oft times fractious community. I see so much raw talent in your writing and hope to see many more offerings of yours as well as being allowed to enjoy the privilege of watching you evolve and develop.

While you're writing, also take the time to read the many good offerings there are here from such as annaswirls, Sara Crewe, TheRainMan, saldne, Wanton Vixxxen, cymry, Wicked Eve, Angeline, My Erotic Trail, bluerains, and the list goes on and on.

I have to agree absolutely. I read a lot - poetry i have always been very interested in - and have read for pleasure. Lately i tend to take much more time studying the detail in a poem, the style etc, than merely content and words. Thank you for the names. I will certainly look at them all.

TheRainMan said:

Thank you!
 
interracial_sex said:
I would like to welcome you as well.

Thank you :)

Rybka said:
Welcome to the Poetry Forum, UR. Much can be learned here if you do not take a lot of it too seriously. That goes for the advice as well as the barbs, jabs, and insults too! ;)

One piece of advice that is often repeated to new poets (and that is because it is true) is to keep reading as well as writing. I recommend at least three times as much reading as writing for a young novice. - Learn what you like before you try to write it.

A second good practice is not to rush a poem to submission. Rather, set a new poem aside for up to a month or more. Leave it alone until you can read it with an unbiased eye, that is until you can look at it as you would look at a work that you had not written. If then you see nothing that you want to change, it is ready to meet the public, but probably not before.
:rose: :) :rose:

Thank you for the good advice. All of what i have submitted was written many years ago. I tend to pasturise - go back - get more distance - sometimes i have up to 12 drafts of the same poem. And then i start again if i have to. I feel the basic "design" is so important.
 
Liar said:
The others have already said all I was going to say.

So...um...hi! :)

Hello :)

Angeline said:
Welcome to the poetry forum. You're a brave one to start a thread after all the arguing here of late. I'm glad you did. :)

Stick around, post in the threads and join the contests. Like LeBroz said, this can be a fractious place, but everyone here shares your love of poetry and writing.

:rose:

Brave? ha ha ha. Ignorant is more like it :) I will be sticking thank you!
 
wildsweetone said:
hi Una welcome to Litland. enjoy your stay. :)

Is this where you say - you can check out anytime you want, but you can never leave? :) Thank you for the welcome.
 
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