IUsed2BaWriter
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Hello,
I’m fairly new to these parts. My first story has just been published. And I’d really appreciate any constructive thoughts, comments or feedback you might have. This is my first time writing something with a sexual component, which I found was fun but not easy either.
The Photoshoot
The story is kind of long, (I’ve always tended to be that way with any genre), but as a reader, I know I prefer stories that build up. I hope you find it’s not too long. I’ve begun work on an unrelated work and it’s shaping up to be quite lengthy.
Again, any thoughts are welcome.
(Please excuse the idiotic typo in the first line of my note at the beginning — I spent three days proofreading, then add two sentences at the top and fucked up. Sigh.)
I’m fairly new to these parts. My first story has just been published. And I’d really appreciate any constructive thoughts, comments or feedback you might have. This is my first time writing something with a sexual component, which I found was fun but not easy either.
The Photoshoot
The story is kind of long, (I’ve always tended to be that way with any genre), but as a reader, I know I prefer stories that build up. I hope you find it’s not too long. I’ve begun work on an unrelated work and it’s shaping up to be quite lengthy.
Again, any thoughts are welcome.
(Please excuse the idiotic typo in the first line of my note at the beginning — I spent three days proofreading, then add two sentences at the top and fucked up. Sigh.)
