Newb author looking for feedback for mom-son incest stories

defiler

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Hello,
I've just started writing erotica. As of now, I've finished two mom-son incest stories. Since I'm just a newb at this and also because English is not my native language, I've already requested for help at the editor's forum. Until I get help there, if you guys wish to read them and give your feedback I would highly appreciate it. There may be a few mistakes in spelling, grammar, punctuation etc. You can help me out with them too if you wish. Here they are - the first and the second.
-Thank you very much in advance.
 
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