New Writer

[Devil Dog]

Constructive criticism please?

As a new writer I've been thrilled and amazed by the feedback my stories have been getting, namely my Felicia Fellatio series.
My first installment of the Felicia Fellatio series got me the most praise and encouraged me to write more. That story has been read 21, 000 times since submitted on 05/03/03. It still blows my mind that people would actually want to read my stories and say such nice things about them.

Excited by the response my first story received, I quickly wrote up another story, Wife goes black... Admittedly I rushed it a little and didn't give it a very well thought out ending. Inevitably I received allot of negative feedback on that one. I don't mind negative feedback if it helps me become a better writer but what I am annoyed with is the voting. I readily agree that my interracial love story has a poor ending but I don't believe it deserves a "1", that's a little harsh for an otherwise good story.

Just wanted to say thanks to everyone for their feedback - positive and negative. It's very much appreciated.

I'd like someone to do a review of one or all of my stories and let me know what I can improve on or what I'm doing right etc.

DEVIL DOG

Felicia Fellatio

Felicia Fellatio 2: License to Thrill

Wife goes black...

Stay tuned for Felicia Fellatio 3

 

[shytilwet23]

Just read "wife goes black" 'cos I'm into interracial stories. Not into FemDomme, so not my sort of thing after all but, as you said, apart from the ending, I thought it was very well written and definitely deserved more than a 1. Personally I would never give a 1 or a 2, unless I thought the story was absolutely bad in grammar, spelling, thought and content. Even then, I think I'd rather just pass.

 

[blueeyedboy]

21,000?

21,000 reads is incredible! Is that from the 3rd of May? To me (in the UK) 05/03/03 is the 5th of March, even if it is the 5th of March that is still an amazing amount of readers.

I have seven or eight stories in various stages of completion but have yet to upload any. I never knew that so many readers would be possible, so this has encouraged me to finish some or all of them, mine seem to end up being very long as usually I like to develop a lot of background to my stories and characters.

I will go and read your stories now.

 

[Devil Dog]

21,000 readers was a shock to me also

21,000 reads is incredible! Is that from the 3rd of May? To me (in the UK) 05/03/03 is the 5th of March, even if it is the 5th of March that is still an amazing amount of readers.

Even more shocking is that I have another story that has been read over 27,000 times since 05/10/03 but has had poor voting results due mostly in part to the bad ending I mentioned in my previous post.