New writer seeking editor for long story

[DrPope]

Hi,
I think I might need a editor for my first story "Journey to another life" I have posted the first four chapters but I'm getting a bit stuck.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480061
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480182
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480782
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480836

If anyone can suggest a editor to assist or any other ideas please do.

Thanks in advance

Paul

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Hi,
I think I might need a editor for my first story "Journey to another life" I have posted the first four chapters but I'm getting a bit stuck.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480061
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480182
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480782
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=480836

If anyone can suggest a editor to assist or any other ideas please do.

Thanks in advance

Paul

Word count and cat would be a big help.