New Writer needs feedback! Please? :)

[aquamarine77]

Greetings all!
I have been visiting this site for a long time and I love it. I finally got around to writing a couple of stories of my own. Look under membername "Aquamarine77" to see them. I'd like any and all feedback - negative, positive, whatever - because I'm totally new at this, and I'd like to know how I'm doing!
Thanks all ...

Aqua

 

[CAT~~]

Aqua,
Read the story about Suzy and the Teacher and I am afraid that its not quite my type of story. Never had the major crush on any of my teachers.
But, the detail was good. I included a link to both your stories so that others will have an easier time to find them.
And I'm sure the others will have more definitive comments then mine. Sorry, I wasn't much help.
Cat~~




http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=27611