New Writer Needs Editor!

[pinkgunnz]

hi guys,

im working on a themed story line, and i would appreciate it if some veteran editors would look over my first piece. i am proud of it. my themes are going to be interracial sex (black female and white male),some domination/submission type stuff. basically dark, and seemy...maybe a gun or two... i cant say yet. but, if you have a sadistic sense of humor or a really open mind, please contact me as soon as possible.


thanks

(pablohoneysgirl@hotmail.com)

 

[tallguy220@hotm]

I'd like to look over it.

hi guys,

im working on a themed story line, and i would appreciate it if some veteran editors would look over my first piece. i am proud of it. my themes are going to be interracial sex (black female and white male),some domination/submission type stuff. basically dark, and seemy...maybe a gun or two... i cant say yet. but, if you have a sadistic sense of humor or a really open mind, please contact me as soon as possible.


thanks

(pablohoneysgirl@hotmail.com)

Hi pinkgunnz,
I like the sound of your story. I can proof-read it for grammar, spelling and punctuation and I can offer suggestions re: sentence structure, story line and character development. Please pm me and tell me how I can be of assistance.
Thelonius