New Writer Looking For Editior

[krystalkelley]

Hey! I'm new to writing erotic stories. Okay, not exactly. I've been writing them for a long time, but only recently started sharing them in public.

My biggest problem is usually editing myself for typos, mistakes, etc.

However, with the current story that I'm working on, I feel I need a look at it from someone else's point of view. It just isn't coming together great.

The story features a young couple, a night of driving around, looking for a place to have sex. If you would like to take a look at it and offer some feedback, I would love it!

-Krystal

 

[LaRascasse]

Hi,

Enable PMs to get a response. Also give some more details like the word count.

 

[krystalkelley]

Enabled. My apologies.

It's about 3600 words.

 

[MLabonte]

Happy to assist anytime with editing, suggestions, etc. You can contact me through Literotica, where some of my erotic writing is posted, or at my email: [personal info prohibited per our forum guidelines]