New writer looking for a mentor/editor

[JackDriver]

Hi i'm Jack. I'm a 34 year old business owner. My work, though rewarding, is stressful and I'm looking for a creative outlet here. I have a few ideas for some Incest/taboo stories and Mind control as well. I've already completed the first draft of the first chapter of my first story, and I'm looking for someone who can give me constructive criticism to help me improve my writing as well as help with grammatical errors.

Please send me a PM if you're interested.

Yours truly,

Jack

 

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[JackDriver]

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