New Writer - feedback

[Electrosexman]

Hi, well this is probably only my third visit to the Literotica ‘boards’ but I’m quite chuffed at having my second chapter of ‘Sensuality’ accepted. There are quite a few more chapters which I hope will be accepted in due course.

The story is finished - switches about halfway trough from Mind Control to the 'controller] being controlled - not sure how that fits in with classification... have any other writers faced this problem... what doesLiterotica do? change the classification?

So far I haven’t seen any reader comments, but if any of you would like to pass me some bouquets or brickbats all are welcome.

I have been writing for many years now, but this is the first erotica I have had published.

By the way, can one delete Rejected Submissions? Or do they remain there until the web disappears into that final ‘black hole’ ?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=408245

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=409549

Electrosexman

 

[mia_erotica]

v. well written story. entertaining. silly. some typos.