New to Writing Erotic Stories. Would Love Some Feedback.

harmonyjones

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I've been a writer for years but was told that my love and romance scenes needed work to be believable. The advice given to me was write erotic stories to practice. I have always enjoyed reading them so I thought this would be great practice. So far I'm having lots of fun!

Right now I'm working on a novella about a bisexual freelance model. This story is mostly exploring group sex scenes and lesbian sex scenes. Once I'm finished with this I am thinking of writing my own version of Leda and the Swan.

I would love some feedback from anyone willing to check out my stories. So far I only have one chapter up but 2 more are pending. I'd really appreciate a rating and some feedback and would be happy to do the same for you.

Thanks everyone!
 
Be sure and post links when you have published your works on Literotica. That's what this forum is for, by the way, feedback on works published to Literotica.
 
Be sure and post links when you have published your works on Literotica. That's what this forum is for, by the way, feedback on works published to Literotica.

I think he knows that and you should read an entire post before you get on your snarky horse

Last line of his post says he has one story up

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1680349&page=submissions

Stop trying so hard to be a hall monitor and pay attention. Yet another example of you giving a fine example of this forum to a new member.
 
Hi Harmony,

Read your story and it's a great start. Perfect setup for the second chapter.

I'm also kind of new to Literotica, and haven't written stories for either category yet, but I wondered if your story would have gotten better exposure if it was posted in Lesbian Sex instead of Novels and Novellas?

I always thought that the second category sounded a little vague, and I think readers who love stories like yours would be found in the Lesbian Sex section.

Also, as I love mythology, I'm looking forward to your version of Leda and the Swan.

Keep writing, looking forward to more!
 
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