lilsweetnana
Virgin
- Joined
- Jul 21, 2006
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Hello, I posted my first story recently and have gotten a handful of encouraging feedback that is inspiring me to continue writing... however, I am new at this and I want to recieve some constructive criticisms so that my next story will be better. Please either leave your feedback here or send me anonymous feedback on my page. Thank you so much!
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=266863
My story is about a secret love affair between a two people and their adventure on discovering their passion for each other... based on fantasy and real life experience.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=266863
My story is about a secret love affair between a two people and their adventure on discovering their passion for each other... based on fantasy and real life experience.
