New title

[gizmoo69]

OK, so I was thinking the other day that Fun with the Family! has a rubbish title. I mean, it's not an incest story, but the title certainly makes it look like one. I'm worried that the title might put people off (not that people have added to it in ages ).

So, I thought that in the spirit of user interaction, I would ask you guys for title suggestions! Any suggestions for a better title?

The title I feel captures the spirit of the story will become the title, and you will get to feel all smug with yourself for having renamed the first CHYOO story I ever wrote! Yay!

 

[Torg]

OK, so I was thinking the other day that Fun with the Family! has a rubbish title. I mean, it's not an incest story, but the title certainly makes it look like one. I'm worried that the title might put people off (not that people have added to it in ages ).

So, I thought that in the spirit of user interaction, I would ask you guys for title suggestions! Any suggestions for a better title?

The title I feel captures the spirit of the story will become the title, and you will get to feel all smug with yourself for having renamed the first CHYOO story I ever wrote! Yay!

Perhaps "The Girlfriend's Family".

 

[RicoLouis]

A day with my girlfriend, her sex starved mom, and her nymphomaniac sister.

That might not fit but it would catch a few eyes if it could.

 

[Torg]

Or perhaps a simple "Fun with her family".

 

[gizmoo69]

Hmm..."The Girlfriend's Family" is good. Simple. I like that.

Not so sure about "Fun with her Family", although since it's not too far removed from the original title it might be worth doing.

Rico, I kinda think your title doesn't roll off the tongue very well.

 

[GoodBoy741]

Sexy Sex with the Sexed Up Sisters.

 

[gizmoo69]

Sexy Sex with the Sexed Up Sisters.

LOL!

 

[RicoLouis]

Okay Then.

"Girlfriends Great Gift."
"A Giving Girlfriend."

 

[gizmoo69]

I'm liking those. They've got potential.

 

[gizmoo69]

OK, so after some thought, I've gone with "The Surprise."

What do y'all think?

 

[Torg]

OK, so after some thought, I've gone with "The Surprise."

What do y'all think?

For this story, I like it. Every storyline has surprise as the theme.