New story

[Sexysmith76]

I've just submitted a new story call 'Jo and the Silk Scarf' and would be grateful for any feedback anyone could give.

If any ladies have read the story and want to cyber with me, feel free to get in contact.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Is this up?

Is this story up? I don't see it anywhere.

Shanglan

 

[Sexysmith76]

New Story has been posted

The new story has been posted online and can be accessed via the link below.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...y.php?id=157325

If you have any feedback be good, bad or indifferent, email me via my profile page.

 

[Sexysmith76]

It seems the link doesn't work. Anyway, the story's called 'Jo and the Silk Scarf' so please have a look and give me your feedback.

 

[MenCanBAngels2]

Not bad writing, good storyline....... but if having a whole night of multiple orgasms is used as a "penance", it seems a little less punishment for her thoughts of how she wanted the other man in the bar...... but should be "rewarded" for her discipline on giving into her temptations to have the guy use her as his own. Knowing that her body was her Masters property.

As I said, good reading, just wording could be different.

Thank you for sharing!