New Story
- Thread starter Exxotica
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Liked the story. Nice long slow tease. The submissive element was powerful. Some mechanical problems like use of quatation marks, etc. Good overall. I have the same problem getting feedback on my writing. I think this community is difficult to break into.
Hecate
Lady Hecate will do
- Joined
- Mar 18, 2000
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just a little "hint" - try again on the Story Feedback board .. and don't feel frustrated! Even those of us thinkeing they are part of the community (whatever that means *chuckles*) aren't blessed with piles of feedback ... I think it is simply the fact that most readers enjoy reading .. but can't be bothered returning for feedback after washing their hands 
You're right!
okay, okay... I was pissing and moaning for no reason. I have a tendency to speak occasionaly without thinking. I paused and considered the number of stories that I respond to vs the number of stories I read and was somewhat chagrined. Please don't rub it in.
okay, okay... I was pissing and moaning for no reason. I have a tendency to speak occasionaly without thinking. I paused and considered the number of stories that I respond to vs the number of stories I read and was somewhat chagrined. Please don't rub it in.
