New story with French Maid

[Guest]

It will be a chapetered tale of a family and their new maid.

First, here are how it will go..

I. Maid sleeps with Husband to get job.
II. Maid sleeps with teenage son, when he is caught masterbating.
III. Maid sleeps with teenage daughter when she (daugheter) is taking a shower and Maid is watching.
IV. Maid lures, son and daughter (while blindfolded) into a hot threesome.
V. Maid finally has sex with Wife after she suspects something

 

[Guest]

Somebody should get on this one right away!

 

[snooper]

* bump *

I agree this has possibilities.

As the thread has whiskers on, maybe set it in the Victorian era with tickling mutton-chop sideboards on the husband?

 

[sirhugs]

maybe at the end of Ch , the twist is revealled: Wife knew of all the other goings on, and watched it.

If you go Victorian, you use the whole secret panel thing. If you go modern, you use hidden cameras.

Personally, I prefer modern- the Victorian thing is well covered, and limits the imagination.

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Sounds interesting, I have a couple thoughts. First make the maid good looking but not a teen bimbo. That can really be a back-clicker for me.

Second your format/outline is good but are you going to twist the story so it is not so evident of what is going to happen next. So many stories are based on one woman who you know is going to sleep with every person mentioned. Just a real drag to know the ending when you have read the first two paragraphs.

Next she is a maid can you at least mention she does maid type things. Like clean, cook, or sniff panties while doing the laundry. It irks me when the maid has a better life style than the family who hired her.

Also if she has slept or given gratification in the first CH, unless there is a plausible reason. Shouldn't there be some kind of continuance of a relations kept throughout the remainder of the story? Maybe not every CH, but certainly some kind of acknowledgement.

Have you come up with a title yet? It would be nice to have some way to track when the story is completed in case you never reply again to us.


Phildo

 

[sirhugs]

perhaps her motivation is that she needs the job to keep her visa ( thus the French aspect)

 

[Black Tulip]

The Green Card, with lots of sex.

Sounds good to me.

She sleeps with the master of the house to get the job and continues to do so to keep it.

She screws the rest of the family
out of revenge?

Degrading the whole family bit by bit?

I think I could come up with more nastiness, if wanted.