new story series

Michael101662

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I am in the process of writing the first in a series of stories but am having problems with descriptions of the actions in the stories. I know what I want to happen, but not how to make it believable. If you have a good background and can offer some help, I'd greatly appreciate it. Thanks!
 
Thanks Lime for the input. I'm reluctant to mention the subject matter of the story at this point but I hope it will become like a best seller, if you know what I mean. Since the story is a lesbian based story I have no experience to draw upon.
 
Whatever you do, don't use a porno movie as a guide to what lesbian's really do! That's all the advice I think I can give since as a male I don't have any experience in the matter either.
 
re:new story idea

I suggest that you try to read some lesbian stories submitted by woman as opposed to men because even if the author is not a lesbian she can at least acurately discribe what she likes where as some of the male authors who write lesbian scences or stories aren't really well versed in that area,and go for the porno type fuck. If you're intrested please read
my story
 
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destinie21 said:
I suggest that you try to read some lesbian stories submitted by woman as opposed to men because even if the author is not a lesbian she can at least acurately discribe what she likes where as some of the male authors who write lesbian scences or stories aren't really well versed in that area,and go for the porno type fuck. If you're intrested please read
my story


destinie is correct. It is very challenging to write from another gender's perspective. I know, cause I have tried and had some success. Having said that, there are a few males on here who have successfully written from the female point of view. They tend to be older writers with more life experience. I do as destinie suggests....read through female story submissions to gain that flavor.

Good Luck.
 
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