New Story Posted

[Wills]

Finally Posted

New story finally up after two week wait.
Had 53 reads as of ten minutes ago and has already been publically trashed by Louise and Lisa the bi-twins. Is this a record?

I've left the public comment up - it's funny!

Will's

Click 'Will's Tales' link below.

 

[raphy]

I looked, but I couldn't see any L&L comment?

 

[damppanties]

Same as above.

 

[Wills]

Seems to be only accessible from the submit page, maybe when it updates later in the day it will appear under the story.

Will's

 

[raphy]

Post it here then, for our amusement

 

[Wills]

Here you go Raph's

"TRASH
12/19/03 by Anonymous in USA
We would like to know what the wife will be doing while her husband is with Anna. The 2 women have conspired to use him at Anna's whim. He should catch the next flight home, not telling anyone, and see what his wife is doing. We imagine she is out with other gentlemen while he is suppose to be with Anna. He will be cheating on his wife and breaking their marriage vows if he goes thru with their scheem. Be a Man and don't let others dictate what you should do. If you stayed away from Anna for all those years, you can now.
Laura & Lisa, bi sisters, NO VOTE FOR TRASH - POORLY WRITTEN"

Will's

 

[Icingsugar]

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters, NO VOTE FOR TRASH - POORLY WRITTEN"

I'm so jealous.

 

[Wills]

Ice,

What is funny is that they obviously read the story to get enough hang on the way it was heading and still trashed me/it!

Can't wait for the next episode to got up, see if they can trash it in less than 53 hits.

Will's

 

[damppanties]

WHY am I not worthy of LauraLisaism? *walks away crying*

 

[McKenna]

.

 

[Wills]

Mck's

Do you mean they should have trashed me with more style?

As of now, (16.40 Europe),I have my first H despite L&L's no doubt voting 1, astonishing number of votes and feedback, people wanting to know what happens next.

Will's (Feeling chuffed)

 

[MR. Gibson]

don't be so hard on yourself wills. you have written some good stuff here!


i have two new poems out. please read and send public comments if you like:


MR. Gibson' sexy tales!

 

[whispering_surrender]

Nicely done Wills. I'll do an "official" feedback later. *hugs*

Whisper


Ps.

WHY am I not worthy of LauraLisaism? *walks away crying*

I could slam you if you wanted? Anything for a friend.....

 

[damppanties]

I could slam you if you wanted? Anything for a friend.....

Well, yes, but you're much too sweet to be Laura Lisa.

 

[whispering_surrender]

Well, yes, but you're much too sweet to be Laura Lisa.

*practices growling*

*keeps practicing*

Is it working?

Whisp

 

[damppanties]

*practices growling*

*keeps practicing*

Is it working?

Whisp

*looks to top left at that pic*

Nahhh.

 

[whispering_surrender]

*looks to top left at that pic*

Nahhh.

Whisp

Ps. *heads off to find new AV*

 

[damppanties]

[B*heads off to find new AV* [/B]

NOOO!

*crosses fingers*

Of course you can be Laura Lisa and whoever you want to. It's all about willpower.

 

[whispering_surrender]

Wills, I'm so sorry....I hijacked again, didn't I? *bows head in shame* I accept whatever punishment you deem worthy.....

Whisper

Ps.

NOOO!

*crosses fingers*

You like this AV?!?

 

[damppanties]

You like this AV?!?

Yes.

*wonders what's NOT to like about it*

 

[McKenna]

.

 

[Wills]

No, no Silly! They shouldn't be trashing you at all!

Read and sent you feedback. Loved it!

Thank's McK's.

Got your feedback, will reply later, thanks for your support. Part 2 should be up next week, already being reviewed. I will submit Part 3 before Xmas.

Will's

 

[Pure]

Good stuff, Wills!

J.

 

[Guest]

Absolutely fabulous. A '5' and public feedback posted.

luv, Perdita

 

[Black Tulip]

You'll find the feedback in your mail.

I had nothing to add to the public praises. It's all said.

It's a great story and I can't wait to read the rest.