New Story***Please Read**Please

[Tricialen]

Please read my new story, Demon Wind...It's erotic horror, but don't be put off...it's a love stoy with a happy ending.

It has a demon, a princess, a king, and an evil step-sister. Even a demon can fall in love and any sin can be forgiven when asked.

 

[MarshAlien]

Please read my new story, Demon Wind...It's erotic horror, but don't be put off...it's a love stoy with a happy ending.

It has a demon, a princess, a king, and an evil step-sister. Even a demon can fall in love and any sin can be forgiven when asked.

What does tricialen have in common with a bobo?

They're both missing a link. Get it? Huh? Oh, never mind. Give us a link to your story, tricia!

 

[MarshAlien]

What does tricialen have in common with a bobo?

They're both missing a link. Get it? Huh? Oh, never mind. Give us a link to your story, tricia!

Oh, all right. I'll do it myself. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=358375&page=1

Now I'm turning into some sort of junior tickledkitty.

 

[Tricialen]

Sorry

 

[MarshAlien]

Oh, come on. You have daniellekitten begging you to write a sequel. What do you want from the rest of us? It's a very good story, full of lovely description. I saw probably a few too many typos and incomplete sentences, but they didn't distract from the overall effect. Nice job, tricia.

 

[Tricialen]

LOL yes Dani does want more...humm I'll have to be more careful of typos. Thank you very much for reading it.

 

[tickledkitty]

Now I'm turning into some sort of junior tickledkitty.

And just WHAT is that supposed to mean, naughty alien?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Distraught

Oh, come on. You have daniellekitten begging you to write a sequel. What do you want from the rest of us? It's a very good story, full of lovely description. I saw probably a few too many typos and incomplete sentences, but they didn't distract from the overall effect. Nice job, tricia.

I thought I'd spotted the errors. I'm only human, I'll admit that. But "a few too many typos"? I'd appreciate you bringing these to my attention so I may become a better editor.