New story, new author, same old questions I am sure

[StressingAsian]

Hey, as the title implies I am a first time author hoping to post my story on Literotica, and I was wondering about two things.
First, the story involves a person over 18, but there is a mention of her masturbating before she was 18 and a brief description. I was wondering if this was acceptable, or whether I would have to drop it. The scene is not integral to the story, but I think it is a nice touch.
Second, is this an appropriate forum to place a rough draft of the story to get feedback? If not, the next obvious question is what is the appropriate forum. I intend to use the volunteer editors, but I would like to have a public vetting of plot points and the basics before I start fine tuning.
thank you for your time.

 

[gauchecritic]

posting very short excerpts is no crime here at the AH but anything longer would probably be better put in the queue at the Story Discussion Circle. (but they have rules about when and how you can post a whole story there, which involves giving before receiving)

This is however, a good place to ask others if they would look at your story by mail.

I'll take a look at it if you like but can't guarantee a quick response.

gauchecritic@yahoo.com