New Story Just Posted

[mynameisben]

Well, a year and a half has rolled by since the last time I wrote a story for Lit. But I finally wrote a new one. It just got published a couple of hours ago. It's short -- only one Lit page -- but it's sweet. If you've got five minutes to kill, I highly recommend you give it a read. Here's a link to it...

https://literotica.com/s/the-second-times-the-charm

Happy reading! And, as always, any feedback you care to share will be greatly appreciated.


Ben

 

[litfan10]

Well, a year and a half has rolled by since the last time I wrote a story for Lit. But I finally wrote a new one. It just got published a couple of hours ago. It's short -- only one Lit page -- but it's sweet. If you've got five minutes to kill, I highly recommend you give it a read. Here's a link to it...

https://literotica.com/s/the-second-times-the-charm

Happy reading! And, as always, any feedback you care to share will be greatly appreciated.


Ben

Congrats! I look forward to reading it! Happy writing

Update - read and thoroughly enjoyed your hot little number!

 

[NoJo]

I'll read it, but only because of your Avatar

 

[Handley_Page]

Well done;
it's an interesting reminiscence

 

[BobbyBrandt]

Well done;
it's an interesting reminiscence

I agree.

I also agree that it is short but sweet. There is a lot of room for development of both the plot and the characters and I wouldn't be surprised if another author doesn't ask your permission to build on it.

Nice job.

 

[mynameisben]

Congrats! I look forward to reading it! Happy writing

Update - read and thoroughly enjoyed your hot little number!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback!


Ben

 

[mynameisben]

I'll read it, but only because of your Avatar

Thanks. Hope you like it. Happy reading! I like your avatar, too.


Ben

 

[mynameisben]

Well done;
it's an interesting reminiscence

Thanks, HP


Ben

 

[mynameisben]

I agree.

I also agree that it is short but sweet. There is a lot of room for development of both the plot and the characters and I wouldn't be surprised if another author doesn't ask your permission to build on it.

Nice job.

I really wouldn't want another author to build on it. It's not a work of fiction, it's a remembrance. Not a single detail has been fictionalized.

I'm glad you liked it, and thank you!


Ben

 

[SamScribble]

Just one word, Ben: Nice!

 

[mynameisben]

Just one word, Ben: Nice!

Just one word, Sam: Thanks!


Ben

 

[Anastasia1999]

Just one word, Sam: Thanks!


Ben

I liked it a lot too, thanks for sharing it.

 

[JerseyJade]

Well, a year and a half has rolled by since the last time I wrote a story for Lit. But I finally wrote a new one. It just got published a couple of hours ago. It's short -- only one Lit page -- but it's sweet. If you've got five minutes to kill, I highly recommend you give it a read. Here's a link to it...

https://literotica.com/s/the-second-times-the-charm

Happy reading! And, as always, any feedback you care to share will be greatly appreciated.


Ben

I don't have the time or the desire to read a multi page story, which is why I prefer reading the short 1 or 2 page stories. I read yours. It was interesting.

 

[mynameisben]

I liked it a lot too, thanks for sharing it.

I'm glad to hear you liked it, Anastasia. Thank you for reading it!

I don't have the time or the desire to read a multi page story, which is why I prefer reading the short 1 or 2 page stories. I read yours. It was interesting.

Thanks, JerseyJade! "Interesting" is exactly what I was shooting for.


Ben

 

[NoJo]

It was interesting.

"That was very interesting music you were playing, Marty"

 

[NoJo]

Finally read this story. Excellent, and an unhesitating (and rare) 5 stars from me. Funnily enough I just finished writing an autobiographical "first time" scene similar to your first paragraph. I guess a lot of guys go through that.

What makes your story good for me is the well-defined but nuanced, self-aware narrator's character.

 

[mynameisben]

Finally read this story. Excellent, and an unhesitating (and rare) 5 stars from me. Funnily enough I just finished writing an autobiographical "first time" scene similar to your first paragraph. I guess a lot of guys go through that.

What makes your story good for me is the well-defined but nuanced, self-aware narrator's character.

Thank you for your comments, for reading and for your vote. I'm sorry to hear your First Time was similar to mine. I know what a bitch that can be. Best of luck with your new story!


Ben